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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. lord_plankton

    lord_plankton Elite Member

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    i like the second one much better...
    mone, your char is nice, the piece not so great and well the hello my name is is executed well but old story..nice though.

    the outline only is also not bad...
     
  2. EXI

    EXI Senior Member

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    I'm just tired of doing simples and I'm just getting mad that every time I try to add my own stuff into it, it doesnt work out. I feel like I'm just trash with style lol.
     
  3. dangeri

    dangeri Elite Member

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    Thepekins : liking y o's but not too keen on the e's bud, bottom e is the best tho,
    Exi : mixing upper and lower case is always a pain in the ass! But lose y drips n concentrate on y shape, overall shape and bars,
    Mogan : like y theme there man, looks sweet!
    Redeyes : solid colours and nice fill,
    Wgone : smashing it there dude!

    And 'truth' for a blackbook comp at my local shop, was well pissed off when I added the second green for the force field, shoulda used an orange or red or sumat to make it kick! Happy critting...
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    ghostwriter Senior Member

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    LEave us behind why dont we LEave you behind
     
  8. WoRdSmYtH

    WoRdSmYtH Guest

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  9. lord_plankton

    lord_plankton Elite Member

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    forget all the little triangle shit, dunno what it says though..id suggest start over again or make from that letters evenly bars n see where it gets you..
     
  10. WoRdSmYtH

    WoRdSmYtH Guest

    Yah it was just a 'final rough draft' if you know what I mean.
    I threw the points on there just to see what they'd look like.
    It says FRITE, btw.

    So you're saying keep the letter formation just try making the bars even width throughout?
     
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  11. RedEyes

    RedEyes Elite Member

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    Use the bar width of your F and make all ur letters sit straight. Dont worry about them blending in just yet, go for more of a slit overlap of each letter. Also scrap that E and lengthen ur R's right leg.
     
  12. MakeItTakeIt

    MakeItTakeIt Senior Member

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    Pretty insecure about this one. Crits? The letter T is a stupid letter, it leave so much dead space.

    I'd give crits, but I don't think people would appreciate it much after seeing that ^
     
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  13. WoRdSmYtH

    WoRdSmYtH Guest

    I'll try out the suggestions for sure.
    But REDEYES, don't you think if I slim up the 'T' it'll totally kill it's form, especially the center bar?
     
  14. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    "The letter T is a stupid letter" Lol word up
     
  15. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Good shit

    Yo
    You got a crazy style dude lol.. your shit looks like a monster and shit
     
  16. WoRdSmYtH

    WoRdSmYtH Guest

    Haha! I think that's what he was goin' for Mogan... Stoned or what? Lol.
     
  17. RedEyes

    RedEyes Elite Member

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    No if all the letters are the same width it should look good, you can bend and twist the T to help just dont make it so top heavy. Heres an example of that T sorta.
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  18. Moon

    Moon Senior Member

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    I think that looks pretty fine for now. I would just elaborate on it for now and see how it goes.

    [EDIT] Wait, no. That "E" is bugging me a lot, I would make it more level with the other letters.
     
  19. Stigma02

    Stigma02 Senior Member

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    dangeri i like it but inbetween every letter there is a space except the R and U maybe try to more of an outline around the u on the left side so it fit perfect with all the other letters? it looks pretty legit anyways
     
  20. Moon

    Moon Senior Member

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    Niiiiice. I like the style in this one. The "H" bugs me a bit, but it's not that bad. Also, the "Z" looks like it's missing some 3D.