mone im not felling the o its too round compared to all the other letters and maybe bend the top right leg of the k out so it looks less like a R? swae that wld look sick if the a was an o but i think u shld use an uppercase A instead of a lowercase a
doing a sketch for a friend supposed to be toms, but i've tried atleast 8 different S's and they're all wack as fuck, any sugestions? [Broken External Image]:http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos...332342250363_525320362_15940615_5956420_n.jpg rask, hand's weak, and work on bar equal bar width swae, looks pretty good, mogan, you've got some pretty good flow, but structure wise, it's nothing special. wordsmyth, i can barely find the letters in there, less is more and the simpler the better for now, once you got a handle on things then go apeshit on connections an shit but for now scale it back
Rask - on the handstyle, I'd try to make it a little more compact, and all roughly the same sizes. On your piece, you went a little big on the R. If you would have made the left bar on your K proportionate with the rest, it'd also look a lot better. Keep it up PegCityBoy - For the S id kind of do a curved top...like a U but wayy less bent.....straight diagonal bar with a bit of curve, and then for the bottom like lowercase n but hardly curved...if that makes sense. I'm too high to take the time and open that shit up and do it in paint. I'm trying to word on my 3d, so any suggestions or crits will be greatly apprecited. [Broken External Image]:http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/5159/imgp3387.jpg
oh well....that's what I was actually tring to do..was small bar on the E and W..I like the look. not just straight up e or w...ill try it out tho. like I said im just tryin to get 3d down.. [Broken External Image]:http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/2551/imgp3391.jpg
Nose2 using a vanishing point helps untill you can free that shit, but yours aint too bad make it the same shape as the letters edge
i know ive already posted this shit but i just wanted to share the inverted version...i love the icy look. [Broken External Image]:http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/DSCF20481.jpg
havent been here in ages or hit the the pencil or pen since 2000 and forever... did this for a girl View attachment 592349 says Sadie btw
@ FluffyBunnies: Everything looks pretty legit except for your D....kinda looks like a "b". @ Unique93: I really like your 3d...I don't know if i'm feelin' the Z that's underlining it though. And I think your middle bar on your E should have went across, instead of down...I like those cut things you do in your shit though, so I tried it out here...but I'm still just tryin' to work on 3d for the most part. [Broken External Image]:http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/8691/imgp3393i.jpg
dont try and modify graffiti creator fag boy the letters on that sit are dumb rask keep it up zewl i think you should round you z more crits on mine View attachment 592373 View attachment 592374 View attachment 592375 i painted this thats y is juss a sketch View attachment 592376 View attachment 592377 i pooped here ^^ View attachment 592378 View attachment 592379 View attachment 592380 View attachment 592381 old nel View attachment 592382
i assume thats Coke? shits pretty dope, but some of its just too much, less radom shit would be nice, and your letter flow could use work, try making the first/last letter flow better, still tho shits dope nice clean style zewl, your 3d is fine
your shit is kind of going sideways.....And your R is a lot bigger then the rest. @Woony...I just saw your piece in the toy bombs thread, so I'm not going to take any advice you give me.....ever.