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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. NosE2

    NosE2 Elite Member

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    your shit is kind of going sideways.....And your R is a lot bigger then the rest.

    @Woony...I just saw your piece in the toy bombs thread, so I'm not going to take any advice you give me.....ever.
     
  2. ghostwriter

    ghostwriter Senior Member

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    rask does it right the way the letters float is ill
     
  3. EXI

    EXI Senior Member

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  4. SECH

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  5. MERTAone

    MERTAone Senior Member

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    unique93 and plankton you guys shouldv put that shit in the intermediate thread
    REWL-lose the extensions and give your letters lots more funk
    SECH-too much extensions and the 3d isnt in perspective...your overall styles nice tho i feel the pointy shit
     
  6. kringe

    kringe Senior Member

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    I was told to come back here, so, crits?


    Coke - The only thing good about any of those pieces is the E on the first piece...the rest of it is pretty wack. Simplify it up a lottt.
    Rask, try using a thinner middle bar on the R and K
    Rewl, do exactly what is on your keyboard.
     
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  7. Rask Wsk LA

    Rask Wsk LA Senior Member

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    thanks... ima try to make it flow up like that and have the k leg droop down to get a wavy flow goin, and make the letters cleaner
     
  8. kringe

    kringe Senior Member

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    Also, make your strokes faster, you have a fuck ton of hesitation lines on the outline
     
  9. Rask Wsk LA

    Rask Wsk LA Senior Member

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    yeah.. dont ever use sharpies , il work it out
     
  10. ghostwriter

    ghostwriter Senior Member

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    sesh
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    kringe botrh bangggin
     
  11. EXI

    EXI Senior Member

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    thanks for the crits guys
     
  12. swae101

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  13. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    ^ looks good, super light pink looks kinda weird tho should just go over it w/ the regular pink
     
  14. NosE2

    NosE2 Elite Member

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    Throw some highlights on that bitch like Emeril....BAM!!!
     
  15. Diesel

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    just a sketch gonna get some prismas tomorrow tell me what u think
     
  16. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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  17. ViniVidiVici

    ViniVidiVici Senior Member

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    no need for prismas homie til you get some structure, go simple, no one likes to hear but you need to.
     
  18. Diesel

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  19. Diesel

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    real simple what else can i do? liek 3d wise or something
     
  20. BoomSlang

    BoomSlang Senior Member

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    not simple enough yet bud, still lacking structure. would not even bother with the 3d or color until you gt the letters straight and consistent