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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. EXI

    EXI Senior Member

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    thanks mesk, and i like what your tryin out i really cant give crits since im trash, but just colour it and let me see it, really cant see what it looks like.
    and yeah the gap is wierd but it was a quick sketch wasnt perfecting anything

    Style, go way more simpler than that, bite your keyboard, dont do 3d, fills, shines, force's anything. just do pencil sketches of your keyboard.. you need to make sure every bar in the letter is correctly porportioned and all the abrs in every letter is same size
     
  2. swae101

    swae101 Member

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    Im loving that piece mone :D
    i got yours done i just got to wait to get my camera back to upload it
     
  3. 408Bomber

    408Bomber Senior Member

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    Trying to get back in it with some simples.... can't get these letters how I want them!

    Some legit criticism + help would be greatly appreciated!
    Examples are always good for learning ;)

    ai52.tinypic.com_34ta7uv.jpg
     
  4. ian

    ian Elite Member

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    ^N's look a bit funny to me with that curved line, and something just strikes me as odd with the capital K and E but lowercase n's and i. but hey what do i know lol. whats your sig from lol thats funny
     
  5. 408Bomber

    408Bomber Senior Member

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    It looks weird to me when I do all capitals, and I have a hard time working in the capital I between the N's. Im thinking of something else to replace it.

    Idk I just found it hahah
     
  6. ian

    ian Elite Member

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    I'm just startin out and a lot of people are tellin me to just bite the keyboard, practice simple, etc. personally i think a lowercase i with other letters capital looks fine (and i've noticed a ton of people almost always use lowercase i's) i did the same in my piece ^^^ it just seems to me that if youre gonna keep your letters nice and straight like the k i and e, the curves in the n's kinda dont fit. once again im new at this so i could be totally wrong, but thats just my opinion
     
  7. 408Bomber

    408Bomber Senior Member

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    Well everyone's opinon contributes, yea I know whatchu mean. I've been trying to get this name to work for me for a while now. Maybe I just need to keep everything keyboard simple..... I just dont like how simple the uppercase N's look since it's 3 bars. imma do some straights tomorrow.
     
  8. Nezr1

    Nezr1 New Member

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    A simple i did a few weeks ago, any crits?

    Nezr1 - Candlelight.jpg
     
  9. Female

    Female Senior Member

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    Thanks i'll try that. I did it in class so there weren't keyboards around.
    i'll post something i did that isn't simple.
     
  10. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    A couple pieces I finished with color added
    ai937.photobucket.com_albums_ad220_Albinoethiopian07_Graffiti_1201100011_1.jpg

    ai937.photobucket.com_albums_ad220_Albinoethiopian07_Graffiti_1128102036_1.jpg

    ai937.photobucket.com_albums_ad220_Albinoethiopian07_Graffiti_1201100004_1.jpg
     
  11. Heksz

    Heksz Member

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    moan can i ask, why the hell are you in the toy forum ;p
     
  12. lord_plankton

    lord_plankton Elite Member

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    looks good, nice coloring.
    i just dont feel all the cracks and i dont like your M.
    on the swae piece w doesnt really fit, too squished.
     
  13. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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  14. PegCityBoy

    PegCityBoy Senior Member

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    yo female, just cause you write style doesn't mean you have it haha, just playin though, listen to what EXI says and check the new to graff thread, are you actually a chick?
     
  15. Stuck

    Stuck Elite Member

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    i uno why u guys are telling female to go simpler, that is pretty simple all she needs to do is keep her lines straight instead of making them flare out at the end of each bar and then maybe round out some bends/curves, Like her S's.
     
  16. Female

    Female Senior Member

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    Heres some stuff i did for my friend
    ai56.tinypic.com_2gvot1w.jpg
    Ignore the arrows and the bubbles and stuff,i was REALLY bored in spanish.
    ai54.tinypic.com_2z8b4o5.jpg
    ai56.tinypic.com_2ykidd5.gif
    Here's simple for ya and sorry about the 3D I wanted to see how it would look with a ruler.
    thing about me is when i draw i press down too hard Sorry about that
    ai52.tinypic.com_qwx8bs.jpg
    Sorry if i posted too many and yes I'm really a female.
     
    Last edited: Dec 1, 2010
  17. Stuck

    Stuck Elite Member

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    ur obviously a dyke right? like a butchy man chick
     
  18. Female

    Female Senior Member

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    Lmao that made me laugh, I'm not a dyke. I just write trey cause its my nickname
     
  19. Female

    Female Senior Member

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    Lmao im guessing there's not too many female graffers?
     
  20. AcrsK

    AcrsK Senior Member

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    blasphemy! There's no such thing as a girl on the interwebz!