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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    For some reason. I like this....Its simple enough. ANd I can see you trying a style. Nice. But like dude said. Give crits to get them......But since your new I'll hook ya up

    Your S and E seem a little bigger than the rest of the letters. I think its due the curve you added to the bottom of both letters. Thin that out a little bit. Your little thing on both your S and E I would take off completely. DOsen't fit in with the rest of your letters....Remember you want uniform letters.
     
  2. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    That orange and purp piece is raw my dude
     
  3. Straye

    Straye Member

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    @Serbr
    Fresh style man. Make sure you work on letter size consistency, and overlap the letter less (mainly with the last R).
    Also, recent one I accidently tore :S
    ai753.photobucket.com_albums_xx172_spuk3_IMG_0007.jpg
     
  4. xX*Conor_Snake_Bites*Xx

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  5. xX*Conor_Snake_Bites*Xx

    xX*Conor_Snake_Bites*Xx Member

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    @serb- nice letters but dude, gotta work on the 3d shit your doing..looks really messed up,i know if you did it right it'd look soo much better.Also, work on the size of your letters..
     
  6. JesterOner

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    serb- im diggin that nice colours, i would say make it all smaller so you have more room cos the end is all squashed
    straye- that shits ill mm but with the 3d i'd make it all like the 3d on the arrow

    heres some sketches
    ai475.photobucket.com_albums_rr113_KidsOnLsd_IMGP4217.jpg
    ai475.photobucket.com_albums_rr113_KidsOnLsd_IMGP4214.jpg
    ai475.photobucket.com_albums_rr113_KidsOnLsd_IMGP4212.jpg
    ai475.photobucket.com_albums_rr113_KidsOnLsd_IMGP4206.jpg

    nuthin fancy but critz?
     
  7. leash

    leash Member

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    straye that is dope i just dont like the arrows
    SPM_A0066.jpg SPM_A0065.jpg
     
  8. EXI

    EXI Senior Member

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    your first flick is better leash, the second flick's c is too big for the whole thing

    euro, work on letter width's etc. just bite fof of your keyboard and make them look right
     
  9. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    leash- i like your shit, but i agree with exi the first flick is better.
    jester- it's not bad, but i say simple it up a bit more and lose the connections (3rd flick) and try to make your bars more equal.
     
  10. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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  11. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    leash fuckin w/ the old english style, like it
     
  12. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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  13. CHOWDER 36

    CHOWDER 36 Member

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    heres some simps i did, booted... about an hour ago
     

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  14. CHOWDER 36

    CHOWDER 36 Member

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    heres one from yesterday's trip..
     

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  15. Female

    Female Senior Member

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    My friend bryan did he's right here with me he wants some crits.
     
  16. EXI

    EXI Senior Member

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    can barely see those chowder lol.

    YEAH MONE WITH THE CHARACTER THEMES!
    here's one im wippin out, i've fixed the E and L.
    ai277.photobucket.com_albums_kk69_flyffm4ner_img1291524870734.jpg

    female- tell bryan he needs to do simps.. thats horrible.. can't understand wtf it says lol.. his shadow is off too.. tag is "okay"
     
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  17. CHOWDER 36

    CHOWDER 36 Member

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  18. Female

    Female Senior Member

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    It says Trey btw, he knows he did it in like 5mins with sharpies.
     
  19. EXI

    EXI Senior Member

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    haha np, but form what i could see, there okay couldnt really tell

    yeah i commented on it on the last page..
     
  20. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    crits?
     

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