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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. ian

    ian Elite Member

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    dude newk, you gotta just humble up and take advice for what it is. no ones attacking you, no ones saying theyre hot shit, and no ones being a dick. i came on here, tried to do a piece battle, thought it was nice, and got totally shit on. i was doin the same thing as you. you're trying to do advanced stuff before you can do the basics. lose arrows lose extensions and just about everything. check the new to graffiti thread (even though you're technically not "new"). Bite the keyboard, stick to simps and then you'll start to get a feel for it. just don't get so defensive and take advice for advice. your shit was pretty weak, and people arent gonna hesitate to tell you that on here.
     
  2. upper90daynnight

    upper90daynnight Senior Member

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    am i a toy?

    just wondering if im any good im open to negative and positive feedback and which one is the best
    also the USC trojan one has my tag in it if theres any crits on that as well
     

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  3. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    yes... you are VERY toy... like i keep on saying loose the extensions the arrows etc. and stop doing fills... keyboard letters are a good reference to start...
     
  4. NosE2

    NosE2 Elite Member

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  5. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    ^haha!

    upper90 make sure people can read your shit before you color it, and choose colors that arent gonna blend togethor and make your letters look like blobs of color smushed together, only one i can read is the last one
     
  6. YeSnOmAyBe

    YeSnOmAyBe Member

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  7. pointman

    pointman Senior Member

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    Quickly drew up some other shit today after work this is my second attempt at graffiti i should say afarm6.static.flickr.com_5170_5253041556_8474f34788.png
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    Changed the lettering to sato as i just think its a nice formation hopefully no one else is on road with this name?
     
  8. upper90daynnight

    upper90daynnight Senior Member

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    thanks and what do you mean by fills?
     
  9. 408Bomber

    408Bomber Senior Member

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    Simples bro. Get a piece of binder paper and do your name exactley how the letters are on you'r keyboard.

    I like this alot actualy, Im not feeling the arrow coming out of the A, maybe try and make it smaller or use a simple bar.




    did this last night!!!
    ai590.photobucket.com_albums_ss344_BanditxSwagg_Graffiti_knine.jpg

    Please give honest crits, I don't like how the 3d on the E is but blehh hard to even it out compared to the K.
     
  10. 408Bomber

    408Bomber Senior Member

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    A fill is how you color your piece bro. Hence the name FILL.

    your welcome :cool:
     
  11. upper90daynnight

    upper90daynnight Senior Member

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    thanks for the crits and do i have potential?

    and any suggestions on which style to go with?
     
  12. 408Bomber

    408Bomber Senior Member

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    of course,everybody has thier own potential the key to it is unlocking it. As for style you have to make up your own style.

    but for now stick to keyboard letters. what do yu write? ill show you what yu should be doing.
     
  13. upper90daynnight

    upper90daynnight Senior Member

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    I usually do "SICK" but ive never really decided on one yet and thanks so much
     
  14. 408Bomber

    408Bomber Senior Member

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    Well take sometime right now and think of 3-5 letters you like and try an form a name with them.

    Think of words and how you can alter them, like my name for example
    Canine - KNINE
    Unque - UNEEK
    Can Too - Can2


    Get it?
     
  15. upper90daynnight

    upper90daynnight Senior Member

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    Yea i do thanks umm okay STYUL
     
  16. 408Bomber

    408Bomber Senior Member

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    might wanna try something differant lol.....

    sleep on it bro, remember your name is a respresentation of you! Find something that inside your mind,body,and soul yu feel is just so right.

    ai590.photobucket.com_albums_ss344_BanditxSwagg_Graffiti_knine.jpg
    bump for crits?
     
  17. upper90daynnight

    upper90daynnight Senior Member

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    MoganOne Moderator

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  19. 408Bomber

    408Bomber Senior Member

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    No problem bro. That's what this community is for, helpng eachother out
    United We Write!!!
     
  20. YeSnOmAyBe

    YeSnOmAyBe Member

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    k9 lose the details in the 3d try to relax and draw straight lines it looks like your forcing it, you cant force your self to be creative..