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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Rask Wsk LA

    Rask Wsk LA Senior Member

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    this is kinda w/e but just lookin for a little bit of critique.

    I know that thats the famous rask, i dont care, pretty surre he writes in a different continent than me, and if not w/e everyone writeseverything
     

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  2. thepekins

    thepekins Guest

    whatever dude but if your writing rask, everyone will think you're toy
     
  3. upper90daynnight

    upper90daynnight Senior Member

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    alright i really like the letter R, A, E, S so I does RASE sound okay?
     
  4. BlacktodaFuture

    BlacktodaFuture Elite Member

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  5. upper90daynnight

    upper90daynnight Senior Member

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    alright ill try it and post it asap thanks
     
  6. upper90daynnight

    upper90daynnight Senior Member

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    alright now how can i make the lettering better? this is just a really quick sketch so things arent real cleaned up
     

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  7. Rask Wsk LA

    Rask Wsk LA Senior Member

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  8. thepekins

    thepekins Guest

    rask you should battle me. just cus im bored
     
  9. upper90daynnight

    upper90daynnight Senior Member

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    heres my simple where to go from here obviously modify letters....

    heres my simple where to go from here obviously modify letters but any specific advice as far as that goes?
     

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  10. kringe

    kringe Senior Member

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    You have to just keep doing simples for a while mann.

    afarm6.static.flickr.com_5128_5255413470_fea084b5f4_z.jpg
    School sketch turned full pager
    afarm6.static.flickr.com_5001_5254600337_8744660474_b.jpg
    Art project.
     
  11. Rask Wsk LA

    Rask Wsk LA Senior Member

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    take that simple, and squish it together alittle

    Edit: @thepekins , um alright but im not that good
     
  12. ian

    ian Elite Member

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    @Rask, i like that piece dude, clean up the fill a bit but it looks pretty nice
    @Raes, try curvin the S instead of doin it straight lines like that, you curved the R so do the same with the S. focus on bar consistency, lose the 3d for now and just do keyboard letters. once you're comfortable with that, move the letters together and start to overlap them, then maybe try a vanishing point for 3d, when you get good at that is when you can start messing around with shapes and stuff, but until then, keep it as simple as you can. it may sound boring, but this isnt something you can learn overnight

    [Broken External Image]:http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/9894/imag0255a.jpg

    got around to coloring this one finally, dont really like the 1, and the 3 didnt turn out great either, and whoever suggested the x-ray thing, i was gonna do that, but i fucked it up. crits pleaseeee
     
  13. Rask Wsk LA

    Rask Wsk LA Senior Member

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    just a quick simple + arrows. that oct31 came out dope, the pumpkin is killin that shit, hit a christmas style
     

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  14. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Rask the places you put the Arrows coming out of are very weak bro... I like how simple the letters are.. And the handy is not bad you are on the right foot
     
  15. YeSnOmAyBe

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    still loving the rask handy... try to put the arrow where they will flow out in stead of being fourced out. think of an arrow as just an exstension off the bar you just drew
     
  16. IbuprofenTablets

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  17. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    LOL get the fuuk outta here with that ni99a... :D
     
  18. IbuprofenTablets

    IbuprofenTablets Banned

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    Bottom page bump.

    It was a quick 5minute sketch; I was in a rush.
    Although I think it cam out gud
    it might b a litle shaky thoug


    @Rask wsk:
    ur work needs imporovmint
    you need to add more arrows to properly express yourselfin graff; rule #1.
    Work on your graff overall.
    Youve got a lon way to go freind
     
  19. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    ^^just stop right there...
     
  20. ian

    ian Elite Member

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    lololololololol lovin this thread right about now