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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Word thanks good looking out my dude.
     
  2. M3KA1!

    M3KA1! Elite Member

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    Mone i would really like to see you step a little outside of yer box. yer work is good and it is indeed consistent. what you do you've got on lock but i'd like to see it go a step further. just a suggestion
     
  3. ..romero..

    ..romero.. Elite Member

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    i think this statement is consdered an oxymoron...i say i think because i have no clue what the hell im talking about,...
     
  4. YeSnOmAyBe

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    rib cage- i like the style match the cross bars with all your letters the r,e,a,h... pull the A closer to the e, also if your going to put the little flips in the R,A,H put them in all the letters

    93- dope magic fresh

    mone- i like the same shit as always but the o does resemble a c. also the m's beginging is a little choppy

    some resent and past shiz camera dates off **
     

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  5. Female

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    Im going to post a one-line bubble letter. when i get home. Doing one lines would probably help me with my bubble letters
     
  6. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    I'm picking up what your puttin down
     
  7. NosE2

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  8. M3KA1!

    M3KA1! Elite Member

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    what am i puttin down? just the suggestion orrr??
     
  9. NosE2

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  10. leash

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    u write 5 years and still u have shaky lines....

    @nos like ur last one
     
  11. kringe

    kringe Senior Member

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    afarm6.static.flickr.com_5005_5267289576_9b8b518cd1_z.jpg
    Any crits and ideas for a background is greatly appreciated.

    I dig the majority of that, Nose, although, watch your widths. And, on the Smart Went Crazy one, those things....are weird. You know what things I mean..

    Newt, pick a name that actually has some type of meaning to you, so that you will be more inclined to stick with it. And work on the throw a lott.

    YesNoMaybe - Work on simples.

    RibCage - Do keyboard letters/computer fonts.
     
  12. bait

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    dope fill kringe
     
  13. TastyMcNasty

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    kringe dopeness... i have no clue what you should do for a background tho...
    shit from the past couple of days... im not feeling my S or A or the 3d ... always looking for crits
     

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  14. Female

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    Ignore the D and the word at the bottom, I know the B is too small and the O is too big and the R is uneven. Feel free to crit, and the roundness is fucked.
    ai54.tinypic.com_16bzqxs.jpg
     
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  15. M3KA1!

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    k yea just work on tryin to keep yer letters generally the same size and proportionate. then maybe work on the flow of the whole thing and the letter structure. yer "b" can do without the crosshairs and the "r" the dolla dolla bill sign. that shit just looks silly at this point. but keep workin at it
     
  16. Culture_Shock

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    Kringe, is that your crew inside your piece? fresh.
     
  17. Female

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    Yeah i know i did it with only one line. so yeah ty for crit i'll work on it
     
  18. kringe

    kringe Senior Member

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    Nah, I write Eons 3. Tre = 3 in italian.
    Although, putting crew name in the fill is also a good idea. Might use that some time.
     
  19. ghostwriter

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    BORE ... keep illin highliter high hup i neeeda get me some
     
  20. Female

    Female Senior Member

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    hahaha mine is low on ink. i did that with out lifting the highlighter off the paper. good exercise