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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. ian

    ian Elite Member

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    Nose-i like them all, and i really like the fill on that first
    kringe-looks good to me man, although idk how i feel about that o being only half as big as the others
    tasty-piece looks nice, the a and the R on the second throwie look pretty similar, although its not as bad on the 3rd, just work on that but youre headed in the right direction
    Female-your letters get bigger as you go, and if youre gonna do mostly lowercase i'd do them all lowercase (the B), and like someone said id lose the random stuff for now and focus on your structure

    [Broken External Image]:http://img813.imageshack.us/img813/9735/imag0260.jpg

    Did this one for the most recent battle, lookin for some crits. Right bar of the N is a little small and this fill is kinda sloppy, but overall i like the way it turned out
     
  2. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Yeah I here what you are sayin... I need to take it furtherfor sure...
    @Nose: Slug is the shit
     
  3. ART_CRIME

    ART_CRIME New Member

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    lol i write yesir.
     
  4. YeSnOmAyBe

    YeSnOmAyBe Member

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    haha o yea post some shit up yo!
     
  5. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    fuckin wit some pens and markers
    ai937.photobucket.com_albums_ad220_Albinoethiopian07_1217100057_1.jpg
    Some chit i'm workin on
    ai937.photobucket.com_albums_ad220_Albinoethiopian07_1216102118_1.jpg
     
  6. Female

    Female Senior Member

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    Sorry about attachment(at school). i think this one is better than the other and what should i put inside of the letters. (having problems with the letter B) Might do another E is too big.
     
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  7. anarone

    anarone Senior Member

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    Mogan i love what your doing.

    Female - define the letters with dots etc and its an ok starting point.
     
  8. NosE2

    NosE2 Elite Member

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    Female - Try doing straight letters now, with 3d.

    Monerr- You should definitely do a whole piece with that black/green color scheme. On the bottom one it looks like you went a little big on your M and I think you can make that E look a little bit better
     
  9. Female

    Female Senior Member

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    What do you mean define the letters?

    ok i'll work on that.
     
  10. FlippingChickens

    FlippingChickens Banned

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    female i think he means like adding random shit inside the letters so u can read them with ease,like this...

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    some ugly shit i never posted

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    Mone - the colors and cleanliness of the first one are dope,the second one is fresh but the drips would have been better if they were less thick in my opinion,the character is proper

    ian - the right bar of the n is huge ,should have kept it like the left bar and it would have looked alot more clean

    ribcage - watch your bar width,dont put your 3d over your letters ....

    yes - the only one that is pretty decent is the first one but you need to seriously go more simple stop trying to do crazy shit

    nose - that nova peice is nice and im feeling that brutal peice just not the letter b or the 3d

    soar - im feeling your throwup,but in my opinion a lowercase 'a' would suit it better..also fix that thing poping out on the left side of ur s,it looks strange
     
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  11. Female

    Female Senior Member

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    Idk cause last time i did that. someone told me not to do that.
     
  12. FlippingChickens

    FlippingChickens Banned

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    u dont have to bump the pictures there right above your post ...and i think you should do anything YOU like even if people dont agree with it. Give me a minute ima do some throws for you just for kicks

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    the letter 'b' is annoying for throwups i agree...i sujest to take influence ( not bite ) from throwups you like and work your way up from there
     
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  13. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    @Nose: Word I'm glad youliked the Black fill wit the green outline... I used a light green deco on the out line and a Micron for the fill... I want to do one with a red orange outline rather than a green naw' i mean...
    Check this one... I like da E
    ai937.photobucket.com_albums_ad220_Albinoethiopian07_Graffiti_1217101616_1.jpg
     
  14. KASE2

    KASE2 Elite Member

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    SCRUBERS.jpg SCRUBS LOGO1.jpg here's an ambigram i did. it says scrubs
     
  15. ghostwriter

    ghostwriter Senior Member

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    s.l.u.g is ight Craka blacks on youtube tell me what you think
     
  16. M3KA1!

    M3KA1! Elite Member

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    no female i didnt mean dont do it all but dont throw so much crazy shit in there you dont know what the letter is. and you can define what a letter is without throwing swirls and dollar signs in there just by tweaking the structure. just start all the way back at simples and work yer way forward. you were onto something with the last one you did. and Mone i dig the latest shit. thasss what im talkin bout. keep on steppin outside cuz i like what im seein
     
  17. Example1

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    try some outlines, some handstyles, or some characters.

    Heres something of mine. not really a toy, but im not a good judge of my own shit for some reason. so ill let you guys be the judge
    ai193.photobucket.com_albums_z92_mystery504life_exam1.jpg
     
  18. kringe

    kringe Senior Member

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    No, you are a toy.. That's really bad.
    You both need to do simples and bars.
    Bite yo' keyboard.
     
  19. Example1

    Example1 Member

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    How is that "really bad"? i know its not the best but at least pretty damn decent.
     
  20. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    example- go simple and use bars before trying to that shit.,.. only thing thats "decent" about it is the fill and highlights...
    lost- START SIMPLE!
    repost for moar crits...
     

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