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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. M3KA1!

    M3KA1! Elite Member

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    i dont really like the black fill as much. dont get me wrong it looks dope, its just a personal preference. i actually like black fills a lot just not feelin it on this one for whatever reason. good work tho broseph
     
  2. Example1

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    I agree with you there. im seriously diggin the black fill
     
  3. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    It would look better if the page was black also instead of white for sure....
     
  4. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    ya word... dude those highlights make that shit pop... dope as hell
     
  5. AcesFirst

    AcesFirst Member

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    Slop i like the style. if anything just a tad to thin.
    Mogan love the piece and the black fill makes it.
     
  6. anarone

    anarone Senior Member

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    That black fill just made that doper dude... really really feeling that there!
     
  7. YeSnOmAyBe

    YeSnOmAyBe Member

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    art crime shits lookin dopetaskic. we should do a exchange.. ive been righting sence 02' too but i took 2 years or so for school but i just started up agian like 3 monthes ago my can control is doo doo right now so my drawings are deff to advanced for my can skills
     
  8. Female

    Female Senior Member

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    Untitled-1.jpg Once again at school. Some random shit i put into the letters. Tell me which should go into(used Photoshop)
     
  9. FlippingChickens

    FlippingChickens Banned

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    that looks identical to the other letters you posted..remember the little add on's you add to the letters dont really make it look dope its just random shit,if the letters are wack its gonna be wack..maybe you should do keyboard letters for now instead of throwups
     
  10. anarone

    anarone Senior Member

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    I agree with flipping chickens it takes a while do develop bubble style/throw up letters and i found it quicker to do once i understood simple keyboard letters and bar structure... Just copy letters from the keyboard keeping bars the same width and letters the same height to begin with... I'll draw you a quick example after i have done my homework.
     
  11. ART_CRIME

    ART_CRIME New Member

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    One of the guys from "the beastie boys" used to write slop.
     
  12. ART_CRIME

    ART_CRIME New Member

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    i'll send old sketches. i barley have time for graff now.
     
  13. anarone

    anarone Senior Member

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    Bore - Start from this... (I know its like done in 5 seconds but its for the idea)
    ai53.tinypic.com_4h5zsz.gif

    My 2 sketches from the past 4 months... Crits please?
    ai54.tinypic.com_309h5wo.gif
    ai56.tinypic.com_e0pcur.gif
     
  14. Example1

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    Well i know im gunna get hazed for this but i wanted to try to do a full page piece. First try on one of these so here goes. Crits welcome

    ai193.photobucket.com_albums_z92_mystery504life_fullpage.png
     
  15. anarone

    anarone Senior Member

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    The fact that your going for a full pager isn't the bad thing about it. Its the letters that is your problem i like the colours on the page and the top left is pretty fresh but you need to do keyboard letters and understand structure for now before you try and add style in because thats just not working. Copy the letters off the keyboards same height and same width until you understand how they are formed.
     
  16. Example1

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    I agree with you that the style is shit. my other styles come out much better then this. But as for copying letters, i have a perfect understanding how the letters are formed. It just seems everytime i post a little tweak on a letter people say its shit because it doesnt look like a keyboard letter. I don't get it. isnt the point of a style to tweak letters so they have a little flare? its getting on my nerves actually.
     
  17. anarone

    anarone Senior Member

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    Theres no consistency or structure in those letters though. Ok so you've went for a sort of spooky theme... do the letters as keyboard letters and do like spooky drips going off them or something like that ? Post some other stuff up i haven't been posting long so i cant really tell you what too do from other styles you have tried.
     
  18. Example1

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    The problem with keyboard letters is theres no visual eye candy for the letters. i could put as much added on designs as i want but if the letters are boring and simple then its still going to look boring and simple no matter how much extra stuff is on there.

    heres a little throwie.

    lalalala.jpg
     
  19. anarone

    anarone Senior Member

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    A dope simple is so much better than a failed wildstyle. You see those are sort of bubblier letters... there is little structure to it. You need to understand keyboard structure so that you can develop your letters into something more developed and advanced and i don't think your in a position to be doing that... I'll draw you up a free exchange though, so keep looking and i'll have something for you.
     
  20. Diesel

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    i know what u mean bro