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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
Damn... I wish I could get PMs...
im pretty sure everyone can Rehz... and i answered Sick. and honestly im not postin on here to show off, im posting for crits so i can improve, i was lookin at some of herstes stuff when i did that piece, but im really just trying to understand where extensions fit well and how to incorporate them into a piece. I'm not copyin his piece and then comin on here bein like oh yeah look how good i am yakno? its cool tho. any suggestions for improvement on that one?
crits? just working on my bars/letter connectivity thanks in advance
Yeah I was kidding Ian, but StayHyE, I actually can't tell if I like it or not. It looks like it has the foundation of a good piece but I don't know if it really does. You'd have to color it for me to have a solid opinion. But I can say that I like where the A connects to the R.
haha yeah i might work on the connects a bit before messing around and coloring it
Crits on these? think i fucked the t on the second, well it all looks fucked haha but im not really sure where im going with these, back to the board i guess.
prismas are running out and i suck at blending them
bump got no crits on the last page
^Way too much negative space with the M on the big piece, the BER look alright together, i cant even tell about the S and O because theyre too far away, if you took out that M i think it would look better. Throwies decent, bring up the top of the O a little bit but its pretty consistant. im not too much of a fan of the handstyle, i think the M is whats turning me off of that as well
Ok, StayHyE, you make that letter structure work well. The 3D is off in alot of places though. Work on the 3D, and those silver shine things can go. Other than that, it looks pretty good. And I like the colors too.
stayhye-the e and the connecting point of the m look busted but other than that the final piece isnt bad...thepekins-perspective on that 3d..the somber throw isnt bad though
Failing at putting 3d bubble around a throw up.. fuck haha
The T in the first one does't seem to fit in my opinion, and I don't like the first O either
BANE- Good shit but it kinda looks like ur A has a boner lol
SOMBER- I'm fiending that last throw mad hard
ARMEN- I like the connections but try makin ur bars thicker
Have fun with Z's bro
z's are actually very good for extensions on the end but an r... just makes it harder
Hey Bane we should exchange i write SBANE
well i decided to finish this weak ass drawing cause i cant stand things half done but yeah didnt turn out as planned and the h is fucked up, but yall can tell me what you aint like
what if i make the z connect into the left bottom leg of the r? then extend that
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