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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
Listen to Fube.
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That has lots of potential, only letter that is weak is the M but the rest are fairly good and you kept the same style throughout, not bad.
that's cool tempo
CPA - You really need to take a look at how to use bars instead of going in like that. The letter proportions are all out of whack, the P extends into the A far too much.
Tempo - Thats a better improvement than your other shit! nice work.
Going with a new style here, not finished yet. Theres something wrong with it, but i cant quite put my finger on it. If i could get some crits that would be cool..
The E is messed up and the bottom of the S could look better, not gonna say anything about the whole KO deal I'm sure your gonna try to make it work.
Yea i blitzed that KO thing entirely. It was definately a shit idea. Hows this instead?
Looks better than before, but the S still needs something imo....
k looks like an r dont connect the 2 right legs
i liked the first sketch almost a million times better
Eh I think they both are pretty good he just maybe fix each...
Did this during one of my classes, didn't know the name was taken, but whatever...
E is super plain and looks like a backwards 3, width of bottom bar of D is off as well. the middle bar of the N is lookin a little weird too
Vini - pretty much what ribcage said, the 3D looks decent though
Ended up with this, it was definately more hassle than its worth.
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@skope what happened to the P? its lookin pretty hurt. and it seems like your jumpin steps again puttin breaks and extensions in, they are wack
cut the nose off the P and start by makin it a circular P cause right now u have part squared off and part rounded. Work on having consistent bar width before you start putting breaks in your letters. Look at the O, the break in it doesnt match up width the rest of the O. Err body is gonna keep telling you to work on the basics until you got it down.
go simpiler and try to make sense with your letters before you start throwin in add ons, extensions, etc
weird robot stuff?
who wants to be the first to tell this ***** to go simpler?
Isaac - keep at it. thats original. just learn where to place your layers a little better. develop that style
some structured stuff i been working on
cant really make a straight line tho
my hand shakes everytime i try to
thanks a lot east coast molly
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