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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. elesdee

    elesdee Member

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    that says BR right? the r is prey ugly and I see two bars in the middle of the s that don't make sense to me, turn that hand into a one liner and i think it would be pretty sick.
    and keep your bars proportional
     
  2. FuckTheFame

    FuckTheFame Elite Member

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    soo fuckin dope
    i gotta learn how to make bars like this
    swae you fuckin killed it man
     
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  3. Cl4sh

    Cl4sh Senior Member

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    Mark: That food looks gross.
    Sir: You have like a billion arrows. Stop. And drop the crown.
    How can I make this less shitty guyzzz?
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  4. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    start by fixing bar width on all your letters
     
  5. FuckTheFame

    FuckTheFame Elite Member

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    and fix your structure. make your letters more "box-like" if that means anything
    bars are easy to understand if you go to the new to graffiti thread
    or check out that acid above you and youll understand what everyone means by bars
     
  6. Gatsoi

    Gatsoi Senior Member

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  7. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    did you already post that one 2 weeks ago?
     
  8. namesmeannothing

    namesmeannothing Member

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    Sir to u.. need to do some simple and drop color and everything else and just do simples..
    Like it mewl..here's a few pages out my bb..
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  9. Skope2

    Skope2 Senior Member

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    Clash - Youve got to work on structure pal, those extensions on the L, C and H are whack as shit. I'd ditch those altogether. To be fair it wouldnt look too bad if you tidied it up a bit. Get those straight lines level and actually straight.

    Mewn - Not sure if that E fits the style, but it looks pretty sick anyway!

    Been playing around with the word 'Denie' - The D looks a bit like a P, and not sure about the 3D.
    Crits would be appreciated.
     

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  10. swae101

    swae101 Member

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    thanks man i guess it was to weak for intermediate though
     
  11. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    skope im really feeling this denie. do it up son!

    oh yeah an vader? im impressed kid. ur very creative wit your fills an all that. peace
     
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  12. sir.to.you.

    sir.to.you. Senior Member

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    Clash.........homie how you gunna say anything to anyone. Dave Chapelle said it best "thats doo doo baby!" And i never say shit to no one too, but you made me do it.
     
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  13. Sbal

    Sbal Elite Member

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    shut up dude you suck mega wiener
     
  14. Tempo718

    Tempo718 Elite Member

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    megggaaaa wiener duuuke
     
  15. Norfsuthr

    Norfsuthr Elite Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://piczasso.com/i/hz1j2.jpg

    Denie- the only things i dont like are how far the dot is from the rest of the i and the D would look better connected, or if that disconnected part was broken and a little slanted you get me? Also it looks a little like a P so watch that

    Vade I like that third one, a little too much special effects and shit, but good letters. keep doing your thing
     
  16. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    ^Thats on point *****, only thing id say is its kinda hard to see cause the colors you chose, if u went over it with a slightly darker blue or even the same blue just made a lil darker its be dope
     
  17. sir.to.you.

    sir.to.you. Senior Member

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    i know im no good and im not givin out critz like i do
     
  18. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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    yeah 3rd thats wicked. shouldda went back over the outline with a reg. blue
     
  19. Skope2

    Skope2 Senior Member

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    Not sure if the cloudy I thing was a good idea. Just looking for crits i guess.
    Ill give some out when theres some more up here, obviously its a new page and that..
     

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  20. FlatScank

    FlatScank Banned

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    Decent man, though maybe just keeping the clouds for the dot in the "I" would have been better.

    was bored on the plane heading to Greece, crits are welcome.
     

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