whoa, lets get this straight, i never called you out. i mistook this thread for the intermediate thread by mistake, and admitted my fault, mkay.
wadup guys newborn - hey how come your not in the toy battles often? tasty - I allways like ur work more wit color, do you ever do an outline?
OKOK my bad anyways good battle man, personally i just think you need to work on the flow of your letters a little more, the fundamentals are definitely there.
block- make the letters the same size, and not scattered, then the piece will look better. week- not bad, but dont focus too much on fills right now, until you get flow and structure down more. mtk- those are bad, sorry man but its true. simplicity is the best way to go for now, so start off by doing keyboard letters, then see where you can go from there. tempo- ya i occasionally do outlines, but i did not have the time. and for those who havent noticed, me and newbornsek are in a little "beef battle", so go ahead and vote on your pick. and its all good man, my bad too. and i know what you're saying. your E in that last fear piece is on spot, but i think you;re trying too hard, putting too many extensions and stuff. oh and im thinking you may need some new markers ahah
@fear F on your throw is steaz, except for the R your throw is nice. Everything else, not so much. keep on keepin on
Good question... ill rip the one this week thats for sure.. gonna try to be a little more active around here as i improve my sketching and hopefully help some people and out get some help myself..
I fucked that R up like a prostitute, CRITS PLEASE! @ tempo That e is a little weird, the m's are good tho.