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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Stigma02

    Stigma02 Senior Member

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  2. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    you went too crazy with extensions and crap, makes it look worse. and thats a real long nose for a ******
     
  3. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    Fear I'd be diggin your shit if you could throw down a better R, work on it, good luck dawg.
     
  4. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    almost looks like an alts bite. not saying it is tho so dont get your panties in a bunch. you or anyone else.
     
  5. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    ^now that you mention it, i can see why you'd say that.

    now can someone crit my stuff? thatd be cool
     
  6. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    I can only give you the same crits ive been giving you. If you want to keep with that style, expirement. Cause all your doing is the same lettering every single solitary time. Thicken those bars up bro, expirement with different directional bends, everyone of your pieces follows the same structural formula, so I cant give you different crits

    O wait, now that I look, all those R's are fucked up. the circle part needs to be attached to the right leg. Think of the circle part and the right leg as one bar, keep em connected for now
     
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  7. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    aight. and i've tried the thickening of bars, but it makes my letters look goofy. and i know what you're saying with the R's, they were bugging me too. thanks
     
  8. SynOne

    SynOne Senior Member

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    Yeah, this piece, the bars and extensions were all even. Till I fucked it all up when coloring with shitty markers.

    Crits, besides how bad my handstyle is.

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  9. CliffJackson

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    @syn i dont like how the bottom bars flare out like that. maybe if you beefed everything else up it would look better, or maybe that was the markers, idk. Really liking the colors tho
     
  10. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    blaming it on the markers bro? cmon dude
     
  11. SynOne

    SynOne Senior Member

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    Yeah Lol Ribcage it's actually a small piece, and all I had was crayola fat markers. No fine tip. So I couldn't do the bars the right size because the outline is so huge.
     
  12. dankbudz

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    so, you are the markers bitch?

    get me crits on dis
     

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  13. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    i think that C is dope without the extension on top. H is pretty dope too, not feelin the lines inside the A and H though.


    outlined it, imma crop my picture next time, haha half that photo is just white
     

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  14. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    the bar I told you to slant is deformed lol.

    And my favorite part of the 1 I posted is the lines inside the A and H. My C is suuuper top heavy, It was an accident. But I made at least one mistake on literally every letter
     
  15. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    you talkin bout the R? i was fuckin with it, but ended up sayin fuckit, woulda had to of changed up the D and E hella, nothin was working. gunna go for something better next time. this shit has beens sitting in my book for a few weeks hah. and yo, i aint no tard, i learned how to use computer
     
  16. ribcage

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    yea the R. Man I got a few books goin now, and theres like at least 2 pencil sketchs in each just waiting to be changed or inked. On days im drunk I just sketch real dirty, and then turn the page.
     
  17. thotz.one

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  18. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    hey dude, you should really try doing the same thing everytime but with a different bg or something. itd be suuuuper ill man. You and saiko could be kings if yall keep doin what ur doin
     
  19. week101

    week101 Senior Member

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    I did one like that a couple years ago sorta lol 14112_1101907284353_1726856102_182285_8321687_n.jpg
     
  20. SynOne

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    Thotz not feeling it. My advice, drop all the extensions. Go simpler and hell... Try a straight letter, they look better than some mess with extensions that don't make any sense.