Workin' on making my lines clean. Lost the flow in this one unfortunately. Crits?

 

tits

 

a few attempts crits would be appreciated............

 

Been gone a while. I would like some good ass crits

 

I like that K on the last one for some reason haha

 

Naked that second flick is tight I think its one of best yet. I like the cap A n all those letter flow pretty well too. Let that E breathe and it would be perf

 

@Naked I'm liking the bottom 2, good shit man

Trying stuff, again struggling with flow haha

 

^ lookin alot better than some other ones you have posted... but i wouldnt do that thing with the "D" where it over laps connect it

 

Yeah I didnt know what else to do, if i didnt do that it looked like an O. Oh well next time.

 

wel u should check my profile if u can see my pics

 

tight man

 

well straighten the left bar out a lil more on the "D"

 

Didn't really focus. Came out ok thouhg i guess.

photo-51

 

Hahaha High On Govt $

looks like somebody spent their tax return on something useful like myself.

 

Meh, bored as I know over crowded and stuff but felt like posting something, give us some pointers please?

 

Please see the new to graffiti thread please. Read Every page.

 

what he said cred....

physh (and others) u gotta work on ur color balance... just use the rule light dark light etc.... if ur fill is light, then ur outline should be dark, and ur shell or final outline needs to be light again... if ur fill is dark the outline should be light and the final outline should be dark... the more contrast the more ur shit will pop... i see lots of people doing like dark purple or green fills and using black to outline... makes everything look like a blob... go here...

http://colorschemedesigner.com/


this site should help a lot of people when ur choosing what colors ur gonna use, click the "complement" tab and choose a color, and itll show u which color will have the most contrast against the color u chose.... and for more than 2 colors theres other tabs u can click thatll show u the same thing with more colors...

and i gets high on govt money er-day!!!! unemployed *****s know whats up! lol

 

@PHYSH - that rhino throw was more characters than letters and it distracted me from the word. Your characters are awesome tho just maybe use like one or two haha. I was feeling the physh throw just maybe stretch the letters upward alittle more, your progressing tho bro
@CRED - the R and D are bothering me on that last flick, pull out the top right of the R so its not dented inwards, and dont ever do that overlap with the D. your looking better than last week tho so keep it up
@DANK - loving the seders
@NAKED - your straight on the ditto looks exactly like NARK AIDS, with the NAK in your name i would stay away from that style. everything else looks good
@DOSSBOG - more detail on the bubble letters i cant make out what ur throwing up