Menu

Welcome!

By registering with us, you'll be able to discuss, share and private message with other members of our community.

Blackbooks

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

Share This Page

  1. Rzarector

    Rzarector New Member

    • Messages: 3
    • Likes Received: 0
  2. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

    • Messages: 389
    • Likes Received: 0
  3. Panic519

    Panic519 Member

    • Messages: 28
    • Likes Received: 0
    Shears ur second wildstyle is better I would outline it.
    Seder u post to many pics to crit
    Rec I don't like the second ones c looks like t
    Shitbouta luck looks like sdg
     
  4. stien

    stien Member

    • Messages: 38
    • Likes Received: 0
    its an inside joke. i know that is mr. miagi IMG_0318.jpg
     
  5. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

    • Messages: 389
    • Likes Received: 0
    Here's some old shit, except the Goes piece. I tried to add the one effect on it...but I fucked it up. And panic I could see the D maybe but that L hella ain't a G.
    And the L on the third picture is really that much smaller, it's just how I took the picture.

    [Broken External Image]:http://s14.postimage.org/moxlndxfh/goes.jpg

    [Broken External Image]:http://s14.postimage.org/cswinqrnh/oldsol.jpg

    [Broken External Image]:http://s14.postimage.org/jxebwrywt/solshit.jpg

    [Broken External Image]:http://s14.postimage.org/6uipdi8ot/soluglyshit.jpg
     
  6. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,759
    • Likes Received: 3
    @panic, i don't need your crits
    Stein- that asian dude is dope, the left side of the face could have a bit more detail though. work on your hands and your letters, looks like you try too hard
    Sol- the Goes looks aight, gets sloppy at the ES, and the GO kinda resembles Norfs Gowj...
     
    Last edited: Mar 11, 2012
  7. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

    • Messages: 988
    • Likes Received: 6
    Seder your piece a page back that is all cut up, the s is dope.
     
  8. Cole_Flood

    Cole_Flood New Member

    • Messages: 1
    • Likes Received: 0
  9. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,157
    • Likes Received: 5
    bump worthy
     
  10. stien

    stien Member

    • Messages: 38
    • Likes Received: 0
    Dankbuds- thaks for the help or what ever you call it and the hands thing where did you get that from my hands suck I know but did you read my mind or something. I wanted to do hands and have him like karate choping that shit but just couldn't do it
     
  11. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,626
    • Likes Received: 1
    Awh jeez. Facepalm. By hands he means handstyles. Like tags.
     
  12. stien

    stien Member

    • Messages: 38
    • Likes Received: 0
    I haha cool then
     
  13. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

    • Messages: 389
    • Likes Received: 0
    I fucked up the E and the S, looked better without that effect. And the Gowj? Whats it look like?
     
  14. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,759
    • Likes Received: 3
    just got its similarities.
    i wouldn't have done that E to S connection. thats what kills it. I like that effect, could be refined in some places though

    Thanks for the bump, Tasty
     
  15. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

    • Messages: 344
    • Likes Received: 2
    Sup guys, could I get crits on these? Ill give some crits where I can but dont think ill be much help.

    ai815.photobucket.com_albums_zz72_willis1690_2012_03_12095333.8245968d7b7d9a5c4c859b7b45c8b771.jpg

    ai815.photobucket.com_albums_zz72_willis1690_2012_03_10173942.176dc9375a2039abeed94fdcf9e62f19.jpg

    ai815.photobucket.com_albums_zz72_willis1690_2012_03_12095321.0cbbebb672b1ab240c27037bffcd8cfc.jpg
     
  16. aaesoo

    aaesoo Senior Member

    • Messages: 105
    • Likes Received: 0
    if you hadn't fucked with the right bar on the W on the first one it would've been the best one by far. the left bar is fairly well done do that for the right too just flip it horizontally. other than that work on 3d with vanishing points etc. and keep doin straights.
     
  17. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

    • Messages: 344
    • Likes Received: 2
    Thanks, but what do I do to develop my simps? Ive been doing keyboard letter for a while now and want to try to develop it a bit more, do any of you guys have any advice? Or should I keep just doing simps and it will eventually work itself out?
     
  18. SynOne

    SynOne Senior Member

    • Messages: 328
    • Likes Received: 0
    Willis it sort of works itself out, but what you will eventually start doing is italicizing, then start bending bars slightly. I would stay with straight letters, maybe even make them italicized.

    Don't like the bottom one on this one, only the S. Trying to get some fills in.

    1331585980406.jpg
     
    Last edited: Mar 12, 2012
  19. sadgeh

    sadgeh Senior Member

    • Messages: 320
    • Likes Received: 0
    Skewr - the K on the first sketch the right down leg is not in proportion compared the other letters. The SKE from the second and the WR from the first sketch and it will look dope imo
     
  20. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

    • Messages: 1,759
    • Likes Received: 3
    skewr, stop biting. its fairly obvious
     
    Last edited: Mar 12, 2012