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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Beko

    Beko Senior Member

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    ^ yes it is!

    but i love the fills skewr
     
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  2. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    "Ladies, you know what time it is"
     

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  3. ven0m

    ven0m or Phat2

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  4. MASTAH_RIBCAGE

    MASTAH_RIBCAGE Moderator

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    obvious and annoying. I doubt it will ever end, I just wish he would do it to some1 else already
     
  5. DEMPO

    DEMPO Senior Member

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    heres 1 for sed . Wish i neva filled it after the outline :\

    EDIT: had 2 go back on a few things.
     

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  6. sadgeh

    sadgeh Senior Member

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    You can do much better man, this is wack.
     
  7. Kinger79

    Kinger79 Member

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    @cred, i clicked reply... didnt work i guess o.0 so to be "simple" should i just mess with straight letters more?
     
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  8. ven0m

    ven0m or Phat2

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  9. DEMPO

    DEMPO Senior Member

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    i think venom is a good name to practice wildstyle with.
     
  10. joezilla1

    joezilla1 Member

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    Nice style Venom!Maybe add some color to the 3d that might create some definition and make your letters pop.
     
  11. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    i think the reason it failed is cause you tried too hard and didn't pay attention to basics. it lacks structure and the bars are inconsistent in size. also i don think those connections will help develop a good style right now. the fill is a cool idea but not ideal for a simp like this, should of left it all silver.

    i think you should retry this but lean it all to the left, and not wiggle the bars so much, reduce it about half as much and make the bars the fatness of the O and bottom of the M.

    its not your best, but its something to learn from definitely. hope this helped at all :p


    crit to urs down there \/ \/
    there is too much added to every letter. E is hidden and i really don't feel the NOM connection, i would make the O is own letter.

    your round robin entry was on point. go off that.
     
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  12. ven0m

    ven0m or Phat2

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  13. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    the V and the E are the best. The left leg of the N is way too squished, as is the middle of the M. And the N to O to M connection is fairly wack. But the coloring is pretty dope.

    this one is just overall wack. Not much else here i can crit.
     
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  14. malto

    malto Senior Member

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  15. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    the M killed me
     

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  16. toopski

    toopski Guest

    feel like your moving a bit backwards phat you've done way better
     
  17. PETER

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  18. Panic519

    Panic519 Member

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    That first venom looks sick structure and colorS are dope
     
  19. RaWs3kz

    RaWs3kz Senior Member

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  20. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    seks, you're just butt hurt... get over it bruda