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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. gottapaintdaily

    gottapaintdaily Member

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    thanks, yeah the R came out wierd, ill work on it
     
  2. gottapaintdaily

    gottapaintdaily Member

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    another throwie done for a battle, crits?
     
  3. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    Yeah don't shape your letters like rocks^^^
    Do a smooth line instead of a jaggedy outline
     
  4. BigFaggot

    BigFaggot Senior Member

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    @kopr, pover beat me too it haha, definitely thin those up, also, Space the k and O out a lil more. and the top of the K needs some attention, make it two seprate bars, with the horizontal bar moved out to the left farther, hard to explain.
    @gotta paint daily, please look up how to 3d online or something, every single one of those 3d lines should all be in the same direction. also the outside of the 3d should be paralell to the letters, you must be able to find a quick art lesson on google or some shit.
     
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  5. lostyoursense

    lostyoursense Senior Member

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  6. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    Thanks for the crits guys and yeah I understand what you mean neer.
    sense- looks good man idk about that add on at the bottom of the n but maybe that is just an opinion rather than crit
    naps- shit looks wicked I dont think I know enough to break that down to crits...do a throw ill give u crits all day lol
    naked -nice slippy slap
    gottapaint- not sure if you even understand the difference between a throw and simp from what you call that pic(no diss) I would start doing some research on pieces and throws learn the difference first then try again.
     
  7. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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  8. ComradeR

    ComradeR Member

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    something new, still much to learn
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  9. iPwnF00lz

    iPwnF00lz Senior Member

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  10. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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    Dank - Like the Auste piece best
    Zeam - Use bars
    iPwnF00lz - Like the S but dont know much about throws so cant give any decent crits

    I drew this on Friday and have had writers block since, can I pls get crits. thanks

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  11. kwu

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  12. "PHYSH"

    "PHYSH" Senior Member

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    Dank - that is very fuckin nice clean as hell, the colors match up perfect........ loving yer work as usual...
    Zeam - needs work buddy, just practice, practice, practice...
    iPwnF00lz - the idea is nice but the letters need some working on, there needs to be some consistency in the letters.
    Willis - I like the style, it's a touch of oldschool very nice
    kwu - what can i say other than that is the shit right there bro........ sick style....
     
  13. lostyoursense

    lostyoursense Senior Member

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  14. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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    Yo atma, everything you post on here is gold keep it up man!!!!
     
  15. aaesoo

    aaesoo Senior Member

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    Got too high and tried to wildstyle.
     
  16. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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    @Atma so fresh.. love it.

    Sketch for my boy Bear.

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  17. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    ^^ I dislike you for the span of time you have been writing and how much you have developed (hater mode)

    lines are always super crisp fresh style. im just glad your hand handstyle lacks (hater mode pt. 2)
     
  18. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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    Haha that is a shite representation of my handstyle cause all i have with me right now is a ballpoint pen... but either way it still sucks more than playin' leapfrog with a unicorn. Nice Gif by the way.
     
  19. H1P30N3R

    H1P30N3R Elite Member

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    word I dig your work man keep it up you will be lacin face melters in about 2 months by the way you progress lol
     
  20. ven0m

    ven0m or Phat2

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    wow, I finally have access to this thread again...