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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
thanks, yeah the R came out wierd, ill work on it
another throwie done for a battle, crits?
Yeah don't shape your letters like rocks^^^
Do a smooth line instead of a jaggedy outline
@kopr, pover beat me too it haha, definitely thin those up, also, Space the k and O out a lil more. and the top of the K needs some attention, make it two seprate bars, with the horizontal bar moved out to the left farther, hard to explain.
@gotta paint daily, please look up how to 3d online or something, every single one of those 3d lines should all be in the same direction. also the outside of the 3d should be paralell to the letters, you must be able to find a quick art lesson on google or some shit.
Untitled by senseless slaps(cosmo), on Flickr
Thanks for the crits guys and yeah I understand what you mean neer.
sense- looks good man idk about that add on at the bottom of the n but maybe that is just an opinion rather than crit
naps- shit looks wicked I dont think I know enough to break that down to crits...do a throw ill give u crits all day lol
naked -nice slippy slap
gottapaint- not sure if you even understand the difference between a throw and simp from what you call that pic(no diss) I would start doing some research on pieces and throws learn the difference first then try again.
something new, still much to learn
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new name, bars are off but it was a sloppy one, the u is a pain in the ass for me
Dank - Like the Auste piece best
Zeam - Use bars
iPwnF00lz - Like the S but dont know much about throws so cant give any decent crits
I drew this on Friday and have had writers block since, can I pls get crits. thanks
Dank - that is very fuckin nice clean as hell, the colors match up perfect........ loving yer work as usual...
Zeam - needs work buddy, just practice, practice, practice...
iPwnF00lz - the idea is nice but the letters need some working on, there needs to be some consistency in the letters.
Willis - I like the style, it's a touch of oldschool very nice
kwu - what can i say other than that is the shit right there bro........ sick style....
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Yo atma, everything you post on here is gold keep it up man!!!!
Got too high and tried to wildstyle.
@Atma so fresh.. love it.
Sketch for my boy Bear.
^^ I dislike you for the span of time you have been writing and how much you have developed (hater mode)
lines are always super crisp fresh style. im just glad your hand handstyle lacks (hater mode pt. 2)
Haha that is a shite representation of my handstyle cause all i have with me right now is a ballpoint pen... but either way it still sucks more than playin' leapfrog with a unicorn. Nice Gif by the way.
word I dig your work man keep it up you will be lacin face melters in about 2 months by the way you progress lol
wow, I finally have access to this thread again...
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