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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Bas

    Bas Senior Member

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    Apparently, there's currently no use in entering the battles, so I'll just post it here.

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  2. MASTAH_RIBCAGE

    MASTAH_RIBCAGE Moderator

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    what are you bitching about?
     
  3. Bas

    Bas Senior Member

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    I'm not bitching, this was a battle entry for the sketch battle that didn't have enough entries.
     
  4. MASTAH_RIBCAGE

    MASTAH_RIBCAGE Moderator

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  5. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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    Got some cheap markers friday and they turned out to be better than expected so coloured a piece for first time in a while

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  6. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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    a quicky I did in work

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  7. Norfsuthr

    Norfsuthr Elite Member

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    i like the C. try a diffrent e or make it shorter. maybe capital a and e.
     
  8. MASTAH_RIBCAGE

    MASTAH_RIBCAGE Moderator

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    alright willis, its time u stop doing weird things. Take those curved bars of your A D and E, and make them one bar, like so
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    When your working your simples, try to make all your curved bars one bar, so u dont get any weird angles like you have when your sketching them in multiple pieces. Itll help
     
  9. QUEEZ

    QUEEZ Senior Member

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    the queez files 001.jpg queez files 001.jpg queez files 013.jpg i need to improve a lot any advice
     
  10. DEMPO

    DEMPO Senior Member

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    sooner the better. I slept on that advice n' it shows in my bars alot. Stay on it though it gets easiers
     
  11. Gregory42

    Gregory42 Banned

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  12. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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    Thanks for the crits guys, ill get something done today and post later
     
  13. Semper

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    work in progress, wondering if its worth putting my crapy writing on it image (10).jpeg
     
  14. rewz

    rewz Senior Member

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    havent sketched in a little while. looking for a new name.... crits
     
  15. TBS

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  16. rewz

    rewz Senior Member

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  17. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    I've seen you do better rewz, no offense though.

    Something new but nothing much different
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  18. SicK-

    SicK- Senior Member

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  20. KroeGHK

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    4Eyes - I dig it, couple small crits tho, it gets kinda fat in the middle of the E's and throws off the flow a bit (IMO), and the bottom of the S could be curved a bit more to match the bottoms of the E's, good shit tho
    Werm - I like the E and the W is kinda working, the middle is a bit boxy though, your R looks like an S with a weird extension at the top, lastly, your M is too big and kinda seems structurally off(maybe thats just me tho idk) keep at it tho i dig where your style is going
    Sick - that S is dope, i like the colors too, the N kinda looks like a W tho, careful with that, i like it, keep it up
    got high and freestyled a piece, i wish i had left out the E completely though and im not too crazy about the H
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    and for the SNATCH battle
    i hate the H and the C is too covered
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    crits?