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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Semper

    Semper Moderator

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    i know you guys think my stuff is bad when i go complicated but before i go back to simps can you tell me exactly where im going wrong?

    little different to the normal, it says DVH
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    sem, the S kinda got fucked up in this one image (12).jpg
     
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  2. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    the first one the only letter that looks like a letter is the D. The H is completely lost and the V looks like an N. The bottom one the only recognizable letter is the M. Most of your extentions and what not don't work very well. Get your letter forms more on point and work on where extentions should be. Your style will work really well once your letter forms are stronger. Flow is lacking a little bit as well. Your extentions will work better when your letters flow together first.
     
  3. Semper

    Semper Moderator

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    Ok so pretty much work on the basic shape of the letters and make sure I don't get carried away and lose them.
     
  4. Halo161

    Halo161 Senior Member

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    i shouldve made the "w" all loopy like the "n but whatever
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  5. Rasm

    Rasm Senior Member

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    No you shouldn't have
     
  6. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    yes. the style has potential. Get your letters to flow first then play with extentions and such. If the letters flow your extentions will naturally flow with the piece.
     
  7. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    really? Your force?
     
  8. MASTAH_RIBCAGE

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  9. Kushbombing

    Kushbombing Senior Member

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  10. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    exchange for the dude writing werm, i think its SICK, don't remember though
     

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  11. rewz

    rewz Senior Member

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  12. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    home grown gees
    Dank that werm is nice
     
  13. Gatsoi

    Gatsoi Senior Member

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    dank i think its about time you put some more style into your bars.
     
  14. rewz

    rewz Senior Member

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    naked... i was alll smoked out on doing this, its me as a pot head and when you see my face it says gees this kid is high as hell, bitch slipped on the wet floor and fell on my weenier..
     
  15. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    Gatsoi, im tryin mang. Not drawing enough
     
  16. Gatsoi

    Gatsoi Senior Member

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    Good shit, as long as you know. your pieces are mad clean though.
     
  17. Semper

    Semper Moderator

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    ok so i redid the sem one and made the letters stand out more, still not sure about the flow any tips on how to fix that image (13).jpg
     
  18. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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    Finishing pieces is for l0sers
    I just realized it might be hard to actually see it, Yeah the N is a disaster zone. maybe i should actually finish so you can see
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  19. pokerking

    pokerking New Member

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    criticism would be awesome
     
  20. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    settle down^^ drop the arrows, extensions and connections, at least for now. focus on basic letter structure first and foremost