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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
he means that you suck and should probably stop writing queez as it is one letter away from queef
I'd say fuck with easy extensions rather than bends just yet.
thanks MN and gatsoi, appreciate the posative feedback. im trying some simple extension shit on that dubs toy piece battle thing but im having touble making all the letters match up :/ any ideas for that D up there?
no sleep, um i think this is the toy black book thread, not telling people that they suck thread, give the kid crits not insults,
Queez drop the u and do qweez, never herd of a writer named queef, but if so just do it just incase, keep up those simples just put more bend to your bars and flow, next thing you know it will look nice,
This should probably be in the fuckups thread since the blue forcefield/outline ruined it, ran out of space to write Cade so wrote CA!! instead lol, any crits are appreciated
looking better willis, but notice how the vertical bar on the right side of ur A is sorta skinnier then the bars on ur C..maybe im just being too piky though, keep at it dude
nah those are close enough. would look better with fatter bars though
ay, Gatsoi, you wanna do an exchange with character?
battle didn't happen and I spelled it wrong so I'll throw it in here...
not sure what the fuck is going on with the d...or any letter really
any tips hints or advice good or bad
sorry for `the paint a marker i was filling got on the paper sorry
^^Try to outline your letters in one movement, dont stop halfway through a bar or curve. It'll come out cleaner. Try to make all your bars the same width, notice how the bottom of the Z is much fatter than all of the other bars, just make it a bit skinnier and it'd be normal. Same goes for the middle bar in your 2nd E. Also, your E's sort of stand alone, maybe make the 2nd E a bit further fromt he first. And make more space between the Q and U. Keep on sketching
queez! i've seen this picture too many fucking times. those thumbs are the wrong way round.. lose the character altogether. your lines are sketchy, bars are all different widths, make both e's the same and that z is all to fuck. stop posting this one and take the fucking hint to try it again taking into consideration what everyone has said!
Calm down man, he's probably just looking for more crits. Don't post a pic too many times though queez.
I know. Its just the same pic over and over. Queez, take the advice, give it another try and i'll crit it properly
I'm with TBS, but i won't give crits
I got yours sketched out, are you looking for anykind of character in specific?
@dank that first S is so clean.. where do you start when you write your S's? mine always come out looking weird cause i don't know where to put my pen down first.
watch write? and nothing specific. mine will most likely be random as fuck.
salix- thanks, i usually start at the bottom, but that doesn't mean you should. i simply do because i have done it that way since i started so it comes out more natural. there is no right or wrong way. just keep sketching
TBS n IBU, there is yer shit. i was gonna do you a throw, ibu, but i decided to not even try. I hate Y's
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