you got them down^^, just watch the S's and E's on the top left ones. the curves n shit. mess with flow, italicized is good way to start. add small bends/ curves where it would compliment the flow you're going for. start fuckin around. but not like WIZ does, he's gay. dempo- yes, you should stop biting people if thats what you're asking
semper i struggle with 3d aswell, maybe try doing some drop shadows, still fuk around with 3d though, with the letters, u got a round S but the rest of the letters are more sharp and not all ur bars are consistent in size, i struggle with that too alot, just keep practicing and try to keep ur letters more or less the same style i gotta redue the top part of the R and make it bigger, noticed how retardly small it was after i took the picture and looked at it, anyone got any other crits?
Kaze - your simps are dope man Semper - I find it easier to just start with either vertical or horizontal 3d, makes you less likely to fuck it up Neso - Make your pieces bigger, if your doing them that small all the mistakes will show up more Not my best piece, tried going bigger, fucked it a bit
thanks willis, i think the CAD looks good, i cant really give any use full crits on that other then just keep drawing man, keep at it rewz did u take a tab of acid before u drew that or somthing?? i like it its fukin trippy as fuck salix nice simp, make the middle hole part of ur A bigger and the middle hole part of ur R abit smaller, try to make them relativley the same size, top right bar of ur K is a little to thick and maybe have it come out to the right abit more, good job on keeping it simple, keep at it with them simps neso- the middle E is alright but the S and N are kinda fuked, keep practicing
thanks man, i been messin with more of like some art shit then letters, im lacking so bad on my letters tho im ganna try better with the letters
work with the bottom one, and make that circle in the o in the middle. you aint ready to fuck with changing bar widths yet cause the way it looks is bad. start making your letters widths make sense, and then when u can do that and realize what looks good and what looks bad and what matches your other letters and what doesnt then you can start fuckin with it. N of the bottom one E of the middle one S of the middle one O of the bottom one with an O like i said here^. work and develope those