thanks semper, yeh thats wat i thought 2 after i colored in that gap..i shoulda left it white but then i was thinking that the drop shadow would look weird then but next time im gonna just leave it blank...or if my outline was a bright color then it would work better.

i actualy like that round one u did there more then the top one, still gotta get ur bars more even but its looking better, with the top one dont have the top and bottom bars of ur S go over the middle like that, keep practicing man

i know this probably looks retarded, was just experimenting and got carried away..i think the drop shadow is kinda off too on the D from the wrest of the letters...any crits on this shit would be appreciated

 

sorry for flooding the thread I'm just bored and drawing a lot tonight
all i can say is thats wack, get the ones like before down first. i know sometimes everyone gets bored and does some wack shit so just yeah remember to go slowly.

the inconsistency with the bars is probably because i spend less than 3mins on each one so I'm gunna spend more time from now on. if i keep on practicing it should correct

 

Whats up guys. Ive had writers block for a few days now, ive been doing simps and I think ive been getting better, but I still see other progressing way faster than me, every time I try to add something new or add extra bars etc to a piece it seems to look worse, im not sure where I'm meant to go from here, can any more experienced writers on here give me any advice? its not that other toys advice isnt helping but even when I crit myself or others theres a limit to my knowledge of graff so im not really sure what direction I should be heading in from here. Any advice would help a lot as I am the only writer in my area that I know of and im the only person I know what writes so cant get any help anywhere else. Thanks guys.

 

i know i suck and am not the help ur looking for but i think thoughs r looking good, i dontreally like that e though but thats just me, maybe try messing with som uppercase E's or even try doing a bunch of straight letter simps, they help alot. just keep drawing man

semper that bottom one is looking better, i think the lower case E's or more normal E's would match the style more though

 

Messing around..critical if u want

 

crits

 

more old toy sketch shit:

 

damn arose that O in the second last drawing is siiickk

 

thanks, old charac of mine. as with everything though, shit gets old real quick. i haven't found a charac to stick it out with. still doing bunnies though. hmm

 

need som crits on this, i think the 3d and highlights may be fuked...i tryed doing some simple effects but i dono if i ruined itwith them or not haha...anyways crits would be nice

 

Kaze - Only crits I have is the D should be in more, looks like its out on its own a little lol, the DVI looks a little bigger than the rest but thats me just being picky, your letters are nice though, really like the E and R

 

thanks willis i appreciate the crits dude, yeh i was thinking the same thing about the D but was too lazy to fix it lol, im gonna draw some more like that up tomorrow and il make it closer then

 

kaze i like what you did with the E

lower case E's, not happy with the R though the hole is in the wrong spot

 

@queez there's no need to make your simps so big. It's a waste of time and paper. Make them smaller and make more of them.
And your q looks like a 9

 

thanks sempr

with urs its looking better but some of ur letters sit higher and lower then eachother, try drawing somthing out on lined paper so u have a reference for how long to make ur barks or just get a ruler, and draw 2 lines and draw ur simp inbetween the lines. the M and P could be abit wider cuz those 2 e's make them look small and the R could use some work, keep at it dude

 

Thanks for the crits, appreciate it.

 

i think the 3rd snark down is the best one there, the S is messed up in it though. and try to make the hole in ur R smaller, keep doing them simps

 

kaze try thickening up your lines

 

^should i go over it with a sharpie or somshit? thanks gatsoi