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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    take ur time with doing simps, make all the bars striaght and even, keep all ur tops and bottoms flat, maybe lose the curve thing on the right bottom leg of ur K in the throws
     
  2. EWL24

    EWL24 Senior Member

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    MN - thats looking good, but maybe u should make ur four look like this 4, since every one keeps asking if its a Y
    kaze - i dont think it looks forced, but i would bring the leg of the E down a bit and make the extension on the M shorter

    crits please
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  3. Salix

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    @ewal thats dope, don't really wanna give you crits cause i'm inexperienced but i just can't help but seeing an N when i look at the L. Maybe lower that middle section a little?
     
  4. Semper

    Semper Moderator

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    Rewz my hand isn't bitten I've just been doing it way longer than pieces.
     
  5. Semper

    Semper Moderator

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    kaze- the swirl isn't even noticeable, just leave the s how it is. keep fucking around and trying the simple extensions


    tried to fatten up the bars and make the middle ones all the same image (20).jpeg

    not so good with rounded letters image (19).jpeg
     
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  6. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    thanks semper, yeh thats wat i thought 2 after i colored in that gap..i shoulda left it white but then i was thinking that the drop shadow would look weird then but next time im gonna just leave it blank...or if my outline was a bright color then it would work better.

    i actualy like that round one u did there more then the top one, still gotta get ur bars more even but its looking better, with the top one dont have the top and bottom bars of ur S go over the middle like that, keep practicing man

    i know this probably looks retarded, was just experimenting and got carried away..i think the drop shadow is kinda off too on the D from the wrest of the letters...any crits on this shit would be appreciated
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  7. Semper

    Semper Moderator

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    sorry for flooding the thread I'm just bored and drawing a lot tonight
    all i can say is thats wack, get the ones like before down first. i know sometimes everyone gets bored and does some wack shit so just yeah remember to go slowly.

    the inconsistency with the bars is probably because i spend less than 3mins on each one so I'm gunna spend more time from now on. if i keep on practicing it should correct image (21).jpg
     
  8. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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    Whats up guys. Ive had writers block for a few days now, ive been doing simps and I think ive been getting better, but I still see other progressing way faster than me, every time I try to add something new or add extra bars etc to a piece it seems to look worse, im not sure where I'm meant to go from here, can any more experienced writers on here give me any advice? its not that other toys advice isnt helping but even when I crit myself or others theres a limit to my knowledge of graff so im not really sure what direction I should be heading in from here. Any advice would help a lot as I am the only writer in my area that I know of and im the only person I know what writes so cant get any help anywhere else. Thanks guys.

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  9. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    i know i suck and am not the help ur looking for but i think thoughs r looking good, i dontreally like that e though but thats just me, maybe try messing with som uppercase E's or even try doing a bunch of straight letter simps, they help alot. just keep drawing man

    semper that bottom one is looking better, i think the lower case E's or more normal E's would match the style more though
     
  10. dream o2d

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    Messing around..critical if u want
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  11. QUEEZ

    QUEEZ Senior Member

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    crits transfer to 006.jpg transfer to 007.jpg
     
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  12. Arose.One

    Arose.One Elite Member

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    more old toy sketch shit: SAM_0539.jpg SAM_0541.jpg SAM_0542.jpg SAM_0548.jpg SAM_0549.jpg
     
  13. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    damn arose that O in the second last drawing is siiickk
     
  14. Arose.One

    Arose.One Elite Member

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    thanks, old charac of mine. as with everything though, shit gets old real quick. i haven't found a charac to stick it out with. still doing bunnies though. hmm
     
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  15. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    need som crits on this, i think the 3d and highlights may be fuked...i tryed doing some simple effects but i dono if i ruined itwith them or not haha...anyways crits would be nice
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  16. Willis1989

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    Kaze - Only crits I have is the D should be in more, looks like its out on its own a little lol, the DVI looks a little bigger than the rest but thats me just being picky, your letters are nice though, really like the E and R
     
  17. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    thanks willis i appreciate the crits dude, yeh i was thinking the same thing about the D but was too lazy to fix it lol, im gonna draw some more like that up tomorrow and il make it closer then
     
  18. Semper

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    kaze i like what you did with the E

    lower case E's, not happy with the R though the hole is in the wrong spot image (22).jpeg
     
  19. Salix

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    @queez there's no need to make your simps so big. It's a waste of time and paper. Make them smaller and make more of them.
    And your q looks like a 9
     
  20. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    thanks sempr

    with urs its looking better but some of ur letters sit higher and lower then eachother, try drawing somthing out on lined paper so u have a reference for how long to make ur barks or just get a ruler, and draw 2 lines and draw ur simp inbetween the lines. the M and P could be abit wider cuz those 2 e's make them look small and the R could use some work, keep at it dude