thanks kroe i appreciate it dude, il make that left bar of the V straight, was just experimenting with that shit

any crits on these? finelined them with sharpie so its abit more scartchy then usual but my finelining always sucks. not finished the bottom one and i think the D is still to far from the rest and the R too, gonna add either 3d or a drop shadow and maybe some simple effects but not sure wat..any ideas would be cool

 

Stick with the top steeze. It's a nice simp, props.

 

yo thanks mn, appreciate it dude.

 

Yeah^ like that. I'm not really feelin the forcefield though

 

thanks gatsoi, i just did a quick forcefield on that one, its not all even and wasnt done all that well :/

 

Kaze that shit is way better the first S is pretty dope

 

thanks sick, i finally feel like im gettin abit better at this shit lol

 

some more old shit:

 

those octopus characters are dope as fuck

 

your shits always soo fresh arose

 

thanks, old fliks. i have writer's block now, all of my energy is invested in my newborn.

 

Idk mannn, those mone pieces you did were dope.

 

i love Arose's rabbits

fucked up a face so kept the eye and did a simp, they don't seem to be getting any better and the letter R hates me

 

I think most of the time effects look better with fills nothing wrong with that though, I'm not very good so don't take my crits too seriously

 

post up the bibles yoo lol

 

yeh i see wat ur saying, im just starting to mess around with some effect stuff so its just not gonna look good lol, not sure wat color combo to use for a fill though, i was thinking bout leaving it blank and making the "effects" or shitty lines or w.e u wana call them the same blue as the force thing..could make the letters the same blue as the force thing and use a diff color for the "effects"

 

Don't worry too much about getting the colors right straight away just play with it if you stuff it up just try again until you're happy

 

sorry for flooding this thread with my bullshit, any crits on this would be appreciated so i can fix anything before i go over it with felt
I think the V may be too big

 

The middle part of the S is thinner than the rest of the letter. This doesn't happen anywhere else in the piece. Have other letters (especially curved ones) where bar width changes or keep it uniform.