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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Salix

    Salix Member

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    Thanks for the crits, appreciate it.
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  2. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    i think the 3rd snark down is the best one there, the S is messed up in it though. and try to make the hole in ur R smaller, keep doing them simps
     
  3. Gatsoi

    Gatsoi Senior Member

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    kaze try thickening up your lines
     
  4. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    ^should i go over it with a sharpie or somshit? thanks gatsoi
     
  5. KroeGHK

    KroeGHK Elite Member

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    watch that whore mouth semper(lol), personally i dig it, maybe my judgement isnt what it used to be but i feel like if you played around with it this has potential, as for crits the skinny part of the S is too skinny and the way you curved the side of your V kinda throws it off for some reason, i'd say maybe either keep it straight or bend it like the other bars

    PS ive been off the grid like crazy lately but im gonna get back on my shit hopefully have some shit to show by the end of this week
     
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  6. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    thanks kroe i appreciate it dude, il make that left bar of the V straight, was just experimenting with that shit

    any crits on these? finelined them with sharpie so its abit more scartchy then usual but my finelining always sucks. not finished the bottom one and i think the D is still to far from the rest and the R too, gonna add either 3d or a drop shadow and maybe some simple effects but not sure wat..any ideas would be cool
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  7. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Stick with the top steeze. It's a nice simp, props.
     
  8. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    yo thanks mn, appreciate it dude.
     
  9. Gatsoi

    Gatsoi Senior Member

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    Yeah^ like that. I'm not really feelin the forcefield though
     
  10. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    thanks gatsoi, i just did a quick forcefield on that one, its not all even and wasnt done all that well :/
     
  11. SicK-

    SicK- Senior Member

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    Kaze that shit is way better the first S is pretty dope
     
  12. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    thanks sick, i finally feel like im gettin abit better at this shit lol
     
  13. Arose.One

    Arose.One Elite Member

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  14. no-sleep

    no-sleep Senior Member

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    those octopus characters are dope as fuck
     
  15. Gatsoi

    Gatsoi Senior Member

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    your shits always soo fresh arose
     
  16. Arose.One

    Arose.One Elite Member

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    thanks, old fliks. i have writer's block now, all of my energy is invested in my newborn.
     
  17. Gatsoi

    Gatsoi Senior Member

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    Idk mannn, those mone pieces you did were dope.
     
  18. Semper

    Semper Moderator

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    i love Arose's rabbits

    fucked up a face so kept the eye and did a simp, they don't seem to be getting any better and the letter R hates me image (23).jpeg
     
  19. Semper

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    I think most of the time effects look better with fills nothing wrong with that though, I'm not very good so don't take my crits too seriously
     
  20. intaout

    intaout Senior Member

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    post up the bibles yoo lol