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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    yeh i see wat ur saying, im just starting to mess around with some effect stuff so its just not gonna look good lol, not sure wat color combo to use for a fill though, i was thinking bout leaving it blank and making the "effects" or shitty lines or w.e u wana call them the same blue as the force thing..could make the letters the same blue as the force thing and use a diff color for the "effects"
     
  2. Semper

    Semper Moderator

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    Don't worry too much about getting the colors right straight away just play with it if you stuff it up just try again until you're happy
     
  3. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    sorry for flooding this thread with my bullshit, any crits on this would be appreciated so i can fix anything before i go over it with felt
    I think the V may be too big
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  4. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    The middle part of the S is thinner than the rest of the letter. This doesn't happen anywhere else in the piece. Have other letters (especially curved ones) where bar width changes or keep it uniform.
     
  5. SicK-

    SicK- Senior Member

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    Peter your wrong it happens in the E and the R I think you should thin some bar widths in the other letters to match. That S is dope
     
  6. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    The e hardly. The one leg of the r kinda... Not nearly as drastically as the s. I do agree the s is dope, but it stands too far out imo.
     
  7. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    thanks you 2, i appreciated the crits, should i leave the S or make the middle bar abit fatter? maybe it stands out like that cuz i made the V too big and maybe even the middle bar of the I to big aswell
     
  8. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    can i get some crits on this before i fine line the shit..not sure if the shit inside the letters is any good or not. may have done too much of it

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  9. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    don't bite my E, that S is getting too close also..

    mostly poop shit i drew on airplanes.

    +10 points to whoever spots my nip
     

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  10. QUEEZ

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  11. TastyMcNasty

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    @dank, 10 points to me i guess hahahah. and you're deff progressing. glad to see you're finally adding steez to your letters. keep it up mang
     
  12. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    queez make the right bar of your U higher

    r these any better? there pretty generic letters..just trying to do some basic shit with abit of a slant, pm me if u still think its too close

    that naked and second bottom picture of that character is sick...nip slip is in the 2nd last picture.

    DVI is 2 big

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  13. Gatsoi

    Gatsoi Senior Member

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    Exchange with dankbudz that ill prolly never finish...
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  14. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    Finish it you twerp. I got yours sketched out
     
  15. MASTAH_RIBCAGE

    MASTAH_RIBCAGE Moderator

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    too pro of a sketch to finish man
     
  16. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    here we go :rolleyes:
     
  17. Gatsoi

    Gatsoi Senior Member

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  18. MASTAH_RIBCAGE

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  19. MASTAH_RIBCAGE

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    stop putting all that bullshit inside your letters^ looks bad. your still doing the whole circle thing too i see
     
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  20. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    thanks for the crits, those circle things is just for this "style" if u can call it that, for this smoer shit, iv tryed other shit on the bars besides circles like on that dvsr shit i posted before, maybe il try something more like that. i kinda liked the diamond eye thing inside the O but the swirls could go i guess, just did em to match the swirl thing in the S. i just draw this shit to experiment, the other shit is wat i wana work on more.

    those r dope pics, i dig those 2 top left "reach" in the bottom picture