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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    i just want crits from anyone who is willing to give them and has experience which makes it even more helpfull but all crits are welcome, i dont wana pick sides and play favorites and shit...i see it like this. your both alot better then me, so crits from either of you or anyone is helpful
     
  2. MASTAH_RIBCAGE

    MASTAH_RIBCAGE Moderator

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    works unoriginal plain and not up to par with his mouth, and now he cant even come up with his own internet jokes!!!! HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA how lame. you bore me now.

    he aint that much better than you...
     
  3. Gatsoi

    Gatsoi Senior Member

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    Your shit looks like a kid built it with lincoln logs
     
  4. MASTAH_RIBCAGE

    MASTAH_RIBCAGE Moderator

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    why you mad tho?
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    you mad that I got a loving mother and my Lincoln log mansion has a guest house thats bigger than your little under ground skirrel cave?
     
  5. Gatsoi

    Gatsoi Senior Member

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  6. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    is this any better or did i make it worse? i think i made the top part of the R too small compared to the top part, of the E, or maybe the top part of E is to big....or maybe they just both suck
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  7. MASTAH_RIBCAGE

    MASTAH_RIBCAGE Moderator

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    delete every picture youve ever posted of that sketch except for this one^, and then i might.
     
  8. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    ahah alright il delete the others, so ur saying this one is decent then? or atleast half decent?
     
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  9. buttqueef

    buttqueef Senior Member

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    @Kaze: i would actually keep everything but the "s"...just take the swirl out so it matches the rest of the letters
    and to delete a post you have to go to edit at the bottom of each post and the you have to press delete like 3 different times...youll see what im saying when you try it
     
  10. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    thanks buttqueef, i like that swirl part :( but i see how it doesnt match the other letters cuz all the other letters have gaps ands hit except the S, thats y i tryed putting that small swirl inbetween the E and R but i made it to small there and even if i didnt, its not really enough to make all the letters match the S
     
  11. intaout

    intaout Senior Member

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    crits sounds like fits
     
  12. intaout

    intaout Senior Member

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  13. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    crits also rhymes with tits, is that really ur stuff in that picture or u just get that from somewere? regardless i dig that canvas standing up in the back
     
  14. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    can i get some crits on this shit, gonna add 3d and shit tomorrow...think i gotta fix the bottom R
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  15. SneeZ

    SneeZ Senior Member

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    Sup Bitchiz?! Havent posted for like 6 months now or wudeva. Been busy n shit. But i was checkin bs. I gotta say seldom thing is goin nice. Props to dank.
    here are my simps, bit old. Just tryin up some random names, to get hang of all da letters. Ill post some newer ones at the end of the week.

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    @Dviser Bottom seems much better to me. mb shorten right bar of r. Nice overall, keep workin.
     
  16. QUEEZ

    QUEEZ Senior Member

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    ok kaze ill do that next time i make a piece like this thanks
     
  17. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    sneez: good to see you back. That S is horrible dude. Your throws are smashing your pieces right now.
     
  18. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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  19. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    thanks shit outa luck appreciate it dude.

    thanks sneez, appreciate the crits, i dig that character u drew, i think the letters r pretty good but i agree with peter bout that S, plus u did it in pen so u cant really go back and fix mistakes.
    really cool to see someone else from slovenia...i think this is the first time lol
     
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  20. Salix

    Salix Member

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    first real character.. crits would be cool
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