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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. PETER

    PETER Elite Member

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    sneez: good to see you back. That S is horrible dude. Your throws are smashing your pieces right now.
     
  2. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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  3. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    thanks shit outa luck appreciate it dude.

    thanks sneez, appreciate the crits, i dig that character u drew, i think the letters r pretty good but i agree with peter bout that S, plus u did it in pen so u cant really go back and fix mistakes.
    really cool to see someone else from slovenia...i think this is the first time lol
     
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  4. Salix

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    first real character.. crits would be cool
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  5. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    lol i dig the stash, nice character salix, keep drawing them up

    was just messing around and drew this shit, may add streaks to the DR or somthing later..any crits on these
    would be cool
    i gotta shorten the right leg of the bottom R
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  6. Infected Demon 123

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  7. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    to be honest. that looks very bad...sorry to say...start with keyboard letters and use basic bars like we all have to do.
     
  8. Semper

    Semper Moderator

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    i agree with kaze, what does it even say?

    my E's are all fucked up in these image (25).jpeg
     
  9. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    its looking better then before semper, on the bottom one the P see's small though compared to those E's and one of the E's is bigger then the other, keep working at it
     
  10. Infected Demon 123

    Infected Demon 123 Member

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    Infected Demon 123 Member

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  12. Soes

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  13. Evroe

    Evroe New Member

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    get-attachment.jpg garbage ... please some tips?
     
  14. Semper

    Semper Moderator

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    Infected demon, you need to listen to the crits people give you otherwise you won't progress, go back to simps
     
  15. Infected Demon 123

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  16. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    Soes did u draw that with sharpie or in pencil then went over it with sharpie? either way just start out with keyboard letters to get basic letter structure down

    evroe, same thing just draw out keyboard letters and try to make them as consistent as possible, it looks like u sorta got the general idea of it so this shoulnt be to hard and same with Soes, just make the letters as consistent and proper as possible
     
  17. EWL24

    EWL24 Senior Member

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    This is a sad looking page, u all need to start doing keyboard letters and use bars
    and @Demon, make ur pics smaller

    any crits?
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  18. Gatsoi

    Gatsoi Senior Member

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    Right^ Lets turn that around.
    Thats mad clean for what it is.
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    Can i get crits on this
     
  19. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    EWL that a dope pic, clean as fuk and i dig that character with the bite chunk outa the letters lol

    gatsoi, dont really got any crits to give, other then maybe lose that bottom right extension thing coming outa ur S
     
  20. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    krumpet maybe have the top right bar of your K smaller and the E looks kinda off, maybe the top bar shoulda been straight and the same width as ur bottom bar, also i think that ur middle bar should have been more straight rather then going on an obtuse angle if u get wat im saying

    could i get some crits on these before i fineline the 3d, the 2nd pic was just messin around, i fuked up on the bottom part with the blue stripes

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