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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
That first one is pretty dope. The "Sentry" looks great.
The overall shape looks cool but your letter structure still hasnt progressed much. simples...
Semper looks good man
ryder- the E in your sketch is cool. Stop leaving off the left part of your R's. Do a Y with bars not that circle. wouldnt hurt to try some regular straight letters either
Any crits for this one
I just started a week ago, I watched vids/read up on bars & letter structure. Sucks? Probably
Sorry about the resolution and the math - was doing it in lecture
EDIT: I feel retarded, haven't slept in a long time studying finals, keep messing up resolutions
^ A buddy of mine calls himself fluxx.
also, crop your picture, based on the grade of math you use, I assume you're not a retard, I bet you know how to use paint.
Blackbook entry by rydergraffiti, on Flickr
R and A suck on this, happier with the Y D tho lol
taking Calc BC, huh?
Fluks or Fluck would be a dope name too.
'O' doesn't look like an 'O', at all.
tried to come up with characters. Ended up with these
Semper wanna battl?e im bored
what kind of math is that? i started reading it and my brain got sad because it got so confused. The highest class i took in math was geometry so i dont recognize it. im in aviation now so that covers my science and math credits.
Yeah sure, pick a word and pm me your entry and ill send them onto chad.
Fred those are some pretty awesome pen drawings.
and a work in progress, i posted this in the other art thread but i think the forum is doing that new page thing again so...
Don't you think its way to close to 'fuck'? loll, linear algebra
Its linear algebra and it is really conceptual compared to other math like calculus. Don't worry I do not truly understand it too actually. I just get bits and pieces and never see the whole picture....
Its like Calc AB -> Calc BC -> Calc Geometry/Vectors -> Linear Algebra
Ryda- I really like that piece a lot, not totally sure how i feel about that darker maroon i think it would look really dope with a more vibrant indigo and woud alow the blue outline to really stand out against the green... but the more i look at it the more it grows on me hahha
Qwees- Really diggin the tag, def some fresh steez, i think if you keep pracicing simples like that, youll be using more complicated letter structures soon... hopefully ill be right behind you
Guster- That grime style is REAL NICE! i think maybe you are over sketching a little bit and its making the lines look a little shaky, but if you can lock down one or two accents that you can add to a simpler form of your piece, layering the grime on would be a little easier maybe?
Id really love some crits... first time back with a marker in hand in a couple of years... ope i havent lost too much haha
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Bumping for crits, reck, the first one is by far better, try to make all your letters the same height and distance apart, drawing on grid paper can help to start out. Also avoid using extensions to start out. Coming back in from a break you'll have to work back up to where you were.
Word will be JIMBO
That landscape sketch is solid
Hey now! long time lurker, recently joined. Lotsa good stuff... Here is mine. I go by "ZOD" ...I'm sure theres another zod or two out there but hey, this ones mine.
shit, monochrome galactus zapping out some circuit board rap letters? i can dig it.
problem is, your letters are wacked out. 1: your z and o both are made of all sharp edges, but the your d is curved. had the d also been sharp (think sports jersey) it would of flown better. 2: your z breaks up the solid feel of the piece by being at an angle, while the other two are fairly flat, and having such a large gap in the bottom arm, as opposed to the relatively tight top. 3: all of the shadows on your letters have different depths, the deepest being the o, shallowest being the z. kind of makes it look like the letters are rotated at different degrees and also helps to "break up" the piece.
im glad im not the only one who noticed it was Galactus
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