The overall shape looks cool but your letter structure still hasnt progressed much. simples... Semper looks good man ryder- the E in your sketch is cool. Stop leaving off the left part of your R's. Do a Y with bars not that circle. wouldnt hurt to try some regular straight letters either
I just started a week ago, I watched vids/read up on bars & letter structure. Sucks? Probably Sorry about the resolution and the math - was doing it in lecture EDIT: I feel retarded, haven't slept in a long time studying finals, keep messing up resolutions
^ A buddy of mine calls himself fluxx. also, crop your picture, based on the grade of math you use, I assume you're not a retard, I bet you know how to use paint.
what kind of math is that? i started reading it and my brain got sad because it got so confused. The highest class i took in math was geometry so i dont recognize it. im in aviation now so that covers my science and math credits.
Yeah sure, pick a word and pm me your entry and ill send them onto chad. Fred those are some pretty awesome pen drawings. and a work in progress, i posted this in the other art thread but i think the forum is doing that new page thing again so...
Don't you think its way to close to 'fuck'? loll, linear algebra Its linear algebra and it is really conceptual compared to other math like calculus. Don't worry I do not truly understand it too actually. I just get bits and pieces and never see the whole picture.... Its like Calc AB -> Calc BC -> Calc Geometry/Vectors -> Linear Algebra
Ryda- I really like that piece a lot, not totally sure how i feel about that darker maroon i think it would look really dope with a more vibrant indigo and woud alow the blue outline to really stand out against the green... but the more i look at it the more it grows on me hahha Qwees- Really diggin the tag, def some fresh steez, i think if you keep pracicing simples like that, youll be using more complicated letter structures soon... hopefully ill be right behind you Guster- That grime style is REAL NICE! i think maybe you are over sketching a little bit and its making the lines look a little shaky, but if you can lock down one or two accents that you can add to a simpler form of your piece, layering the grime on would be a little easier maybe? Id really love some crits... first time back with a marker in hand in a couple of years... ope i havent lost too much haha [Broken External Image]:http://imageshack.us/a/img18/5883/photo3nhw.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://imageshack.us/a/img839/5238/photo4fw.jpg
Bumping for crits, reck, the first one is by far better, try to make all your letters the same height and distance apart, drawing on grid paper can help to start out. Also avoid using extensions to start out. Coming back in from a break you'll have to work back up to where you were.
Hey now! long time lurker, recently joined. Lotsa good stuff... Here is mine. I go by "ZOD" ...I'm sure theres another zod or two out there but hey, this ones mine.
shit, monochrome galactus zapping out some circuit board rap letters? i can dig it. problem is, your letters are wacked out. 1: your z and o both are made of all sharp edges, but the your d is curved. had the d also been sharp (think sports jersey) it would of flown better. 2: your z breaks up the solid feel of the piece by being at an angle, while the other two are fairly flat, and having such a large gap in the bottom arm, as opposed to the relatively tight top. 3: all of the shadows on your letters have different depths, the deepest being the o, shallowest being the z. kind of makes it look like the letters are rotated at different degrees and also helps to "break up" the piece.
\/ experimenting is fine you won't progress if you don't try new things but try to focus of straights to start out once you get them down then you can experiment more often also try to avoid posting experiments until you think you have a good one. busted this out pretty quick. tryna make my style less rigid and more flowy.