reto, nice coloring , rly on point with the cleanness n stuff. But the outlines. structure in your letters lack hard, i would suggest u a letter structure study, its the way to get your pieces up. revom, keep going, your on right tracks ewal, bar width on this one, but ur progressing indeed.
Ewl, nice mixing it up but you did a lil too much, gotta slowly add the steeze till u get comfortable with it Used a reference for jimbo char
Your letters are boring......... Push some of those bends you got and make them more dynamic. Try to work in more flow. But these are nice.
i think ill go bigger, i can fit about 3 or 4 down the page (landscape) ill probably try to double their size. and a shit marker free with a fat outline.
getting better, try to work on your flow though, not feeling the E either. i was looking at some of my stuff and i realized it looked shit so I'm going back to focusing on progression again and trying to improve my line work, I'm getting there, slowly. Kinda fucked up the first B but anyway, crits?