@S33on3 you actually are really shit, focus on your lettering before you try and do fills. There is already a writer called slor which I've told you before and he is actually really good at graff so maybe pick another word or at least practice a fuck load
yeah man those leters are funky as hell. feel like right part of the n could be filled out better to match the dubs tho.
sevon, im not really liking that C testing out some new markers, bar widths are all over the place but anyway, crits?
Nice semper, ur improving, i like that p and r but the e's seem abit off, maybe too much of a bend in it, i like the right bar of your M too but left side seems abit squished, i liked that bombing science simp you did the other day alot too, keep at it dude
Nice stuff sevon, dont dig that C in ur firsr post though, i dig that S and N in ur second drawing, good stuff, i think that your e could use some more work, it looks kinda clunky, maybe try making the main base part of the E the vertical bar with the top right part connected with some funk
^dope S, i like the bandage on the N too lol, maybe if the right bar of your V was on a little bit more of a outwards slant it would look better but maybe thats just me, looks good overall though i think second germ, any crits on this experimentation shit would be cool
@kaze I'm likin it, maybe just pull the letters closer together they look a bit too separated to me but I'm just being picky to offer some crits
^that S looks like a B, good stuff though keep practicing. exchange for Kaze, ill do the throwie and tag tomorrow, try to ignore the background, it didn't turn out like i planned. ill probably do you another black and white with better letters.
@ kaze - finally breh ur simps are on point. im glad to see ure tryin to funk it out now. fuk with it n youll figure it out. These arent workin well at the moment, so stay self-critical and im sure ull step it up. @sevon - they re nice but very "tossy". Try focusing more on the bars. @semper - nice sun, ur progressing indeed. juss keep workin. i wish you all happy holidays guyz. Holla!