They have a very loose throwie feel to them,

 

Ah yeah, they are meant to be simple and quick, they are for bombing trains so gotta be quick

 

@omiz your lines are clean but, the whole style your doing is extremely toy

 

the first two letters are pretty sick just get rid of a couple of those arrows and and simplify the z and e (too much goin on at the end )

 

Loving dem cracks man good shit keep it up.

 

a little somthin somethin for a battle

 

Still getting used to 3d what do you guys think? Crits?
Im already working on the 2nd one! fixing things I dont like...

Fucked up on the angles on some of the 3D..

 

^Don't try so hard...do keyboard letters.

 

@silent vandal dont astick to key board letters. yes that piece is toy but keep working at your style till it looks good. get rid of those pointless extensions, thatll be a start

 

Thanks guys! I think it has some potential I just need to remove a few things (such as the pointless extensions) and re-proportion some of the bars maybe what about this one? Anything I could Improve?

I noticed the ''A'' Is maybe a little to wide and the bar that drops down from it is
a little wider then the rest of the letters..
Lemme' know what you think.

Heres some stuff I did in class a while ago..
Needs a little work I guess.

CRITZ?
The marker I used on the bottom one bleeds pretty bad :-[

Just some shit Ive been working on today anything I could improve?

 

the top sketch in the last picture is the way to go , but dont try and force the flow of them like the way you put a extension jutting out on the bottom of the bars it doesnt match the letters also notice how you put the bar on the R rounded but on the K you did a swirl and on the A you pointed it

 

Canvas I'm working on

And a freebie

I agree with sol go simpler

 

really feeling the fill on that canvas.
heres one i did.
T got cramped and looks like shit.
crits please.

 

@mildstyle if you can paint that second one cleanly it'll look dope.
@silent vandal much better already
@gust the T needs to b thickened up and that R could use some better style, fix the leg length and give the curved bit some freshness

 

yo mark. this latest sketch is definitely an improvement. I prefer this style of A to the one on your previous posts. it sort of looked like a "pi" more than it did an A. so good work. stick to hear simps, you're progressing pretty rapidly. keep it up my dude!

 

That Chap looks dope mild.. I wanna see that canvas finished. But that DY on that freebie, no me gusta.

 

someone has tips to improve handy?

pic for talking