Work on some structure and flare in those letters and if you're gonna color You should invest in some markers At least Benny

 

Akward space between the E and the R Benny.
Fucked up the fill and the weird C

Crits and tips?

 

Work on your letters the E looks alright Im not diggin that C don't half ass your fills and work on your well everything else.

 

start simple lose the spray can n beer add on shit for now. put more time into structure and letters.

 

Exchange with a local dude

 

@MN looking really dope but I wanna see more you have amazing potential already just add flare your structure is pretty good already. maybe invest in a micron for neater lines but the structure is legit just a change in tools and some flare and you can ditch the toy thread easy lol

 

MN that handstyle is sick!!! Youre getting better and better...

 

i agree with ratyzone!

 

Been working on it... The curve on the R needs beefing up and the K needs reconstructing. Anything else?

 

Your 3D is going everywhere. You should try to do it with a vanishing point or something like this...(I'm not sure if it's the correct term)

I'm having hard time trying to improve that T... :

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@mark You've got the idea of bars down, you just went a little too wild with those extensions and lost the structure of the K. And it's a little weird for no other letters to have extensions to match.

As for the tag, try making each letter done in one motion without lifting the marker off the paper. It'll be quicker and also give it a more natural vibe.

Good toy stuff though lately. Rad to see some new heads come through and just improve their art as beginners.

 

that E is dope newk

aker and mark go simpler for now, lose the random bends and use consistent bars

those tags are looking dope mn. that A is clean but the N seem off sorta, maybe the bottom right part of your N should have gone down abit lower

take mn's advice silentvandal

looking better ratyz, with your T maybe try having the left side abit higher and or have your T abit further away from your A

exchange with semper, dont really like it besides the E

 

i dig the style but that looks like semer! keep at it dvise you tagbanger you

 

hahah^thanks dude, i seen sybe tags all over the place, hard to go somewere and not see em up

 

mark: the K looks a little like a H, but other than that I like the simp. maybe try losing the curve on the R and square it off like the other letters for better consistency.

Ratz, that fill is dope. I personally like the T, and the sort of arc in the angles your letters are structured, keep at it. only tjing I'm not keen on is the top left of the A, would maybe be nicer with the same thin top bar like the R, if that makes any sense?

kaze, cheers for the crits bruh. I like it, bar the p. like someone else said, kinda looks like a lower case e. but still, your throwie/simp/loose piece style is steezy.

 

Step it up MNnice

 

done on bombtheworld, crits?

 

you guys are promising

 

Inspiring stuff in here. Keep up the good work lads!

My stuff, can't seem to get flow or a good C



Critics and tips are very welcome