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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. ven0m

    ven0m or Phat2

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    you guys are promising
     
  2. Markvg

    Markvg Member

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    Inspiring stuff in here. Keep up the good work lads!

    My stuff, can't seem to get flow or a good C
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    Critics and tips are very welcome
     
  3. NEwker

    NEwker Senior Member

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    Yo Mark. The C looks a little hidden in most oh those. I like the top left on the second page though, dope colours, If you pulled the C out a little from the E it'd work a little better.

    Quick Bumpage from bottom of page.
     
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  4. SilentVandal

    SilentVandal Senior Member

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    These are bit old but I thought I'd show you guys them.. Again the 3D needs a little work but it's gettin' there! :)
    (Ill try to square of the top of the R on the next one)



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  5. Halo161

    Halo161 Senior Member

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    Hey Revom , you down for an exchange ?
     
  6. NEwker

    NEwker Senior Member

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    always halo, what you write?

    @mark, decided to use your word to try something a little different with my style, feel free to do with it what you want.
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  7. SilentVandal

    SilentVandal Senior Member

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    That's dope man! what do you think of mine ^^ anything I could improve?
     
  8. NewWorldCommunity

    NewWorldCommunity Senior Member

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    forgot some 3D on the "o"
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  9. Bennyboii12

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  10. NEwker

    NEwker Senior Member

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    @Mark: Just the same things I said earlier about the R, the 3D could use work, but you knew that. Try a Vanishing Point for your 3D, might help you get your head around it a bit easier.

    @Sevon: Smoke more Cones.

    @Aker Drop the extension on the A, work more with Bars. Kinda looks like you're using bars anyway, but try keep them all the same sorta size. The Bottom right leg of the K is too thin in comparison to the rest, and looks a bit awkward with how it connects to the rest of the letter. The E has to go. try sketching a more conventional E, one that looks exactly like your keyboard. Also, the R could work with a bit of work. Make the bars of it a bit thicker so you dont get such a gape of empty space in the top, and drop the little seriff on the top left. You're on the right track though.
     
  11. Markvg

    Markvg Member

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    @sevon Like your style alot. Inspiring.
    @NEwker The MARK is dope!

    Only thing I can do today. Trying out some stuff.

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    Crits/tips?
     

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  12. Bennyboii12

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    really fucked up the 3d, and my pen just had to run out.
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  13. NEwker

    NEwker Senior Member

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    @Mark, cheers bro.

    @Aker, better man, keep it simple like that, you'll get better faster. Give it some time before you decide to start adding extensions again, it'll be worth it.
     
  14. NewWorldCommunity

    NewWorldCommunity Senior Member

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    some inspiration for ya both haha
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  15. Markvg

    Markvg Member

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    Thanks dude! Looks nice, can't understand how you come up with those things haha, practice I guess. Gonna sketch something tomorrow.
     
  16. ryda

    ryda Senior Member

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    Untitled by rydergraffiti, on Flickr


    @aker that last one you did the 3d is going in differant directions make a dot on your page somewhere and use a ruler to get the lines going to a vanishing point like others have been told once you do that for a while u wont need to use a ruler you kinda know where to put the 3d. bars are better on last one tho keep it up!!

    @sevon likin your style bro its lookin good, agree wit NEwker tho smoke more cones is always good advice hahaha
     
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  17. CallMeFred

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    I like the style Ryda, too many arrows though.

    Aker, don't worry wbout 3D yet, work on your bar width and get cleaner lines,
     
  18. CallMeFred

    CallMeFred Senior Member

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  19. Jiska Matos

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  20. blackmath

    blackmath Senior Member

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    Finally some shit Im actually proud of, even though my 3D is terribly off cause that can be fixed. Crits?

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