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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. MN Nice

    MN Nice Elite Member

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    Look at how much better that looks with thicker bars. Now just squeeze them together more. That red outline is cleeeaaaannnn.
     
  2. blackmath

    blackmath Senior Member

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    Thanks bible, I might redraw it just to compare, plannin on paintin it soon.

    MN Nice, thanks but what do you mean squeeze them together?
     
  3. Arose.One

    Arose.One Elite Member

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    he means that your letters are all afraid of each other, and they need to look like parts of the same crew.
    looks good, nonetheless though
     
  4. quickiehand

    quickiehand Senior Member

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    take i feel both of those pieces real nice!
     
  5. primitiveplus

    primitiveplus Senior Member

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    GDP! and black dahlia murder. you got a good taste in music Tasty.
    flickage for talkage
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    just a random word i fuck around with sometimes
     
  6. NewWorldCommunity

    NewWorldCommunity Senior Member

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    all my markers have run out so the lines are shit. Exchange with Queez and i write "Sevon"
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  7. Gust

    Gust Senior Member

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    big gaps in the first 2, but not the last letteres.
    even them out.
     
  8. DontEvenCareAnymore

    DontEvenCareAnymore Senior Member

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  9. primitiveplus

    primitiveplus Senior Member

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    hater: on the top one, keep that little extension out of your A (the small one at the bottom corner); for the bottom, the foundation for the t and e need to be thicker. also, the r is a little out of place style-wise on the bottom one. other than that, looks nice
     
  10. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    Really feelin that first one.
    Ide pull the purple in the fill down a little more, and the white highlight with the right hand bar doesnt line up. and the skinny line seperating your loop and bar in the R shouldnt be there if its not that far down on any other letters. I dig em though man, keep it up.

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    Any ideas on a better Z ?
     
  11. Arose.One

    Arose.One Elite Member

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  12. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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    Haven't posted in a long ass time. Finally started drawing again, here's something I threw together today.

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  13. Semper

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    noice i dig the flow ^

    blk n wht and colour shit. crit meh
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  14. Arose.One

    Arose.One Elite Member

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    doper by the minute, yo
     
  15. TrifeLife

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    it took me 9 years to get the confidence to put pencil to paper when my homies were sick writers in jersey, but last year i love this art form so much that i finally started writing and ill be damned if im not a little bit proud of the progress i make with every piece, you tell me to go back to the beginner thread for what? i guess im misdirected with full acceptance at toy status to where to post pics hmmm i could peep out that forum with tips and outlines and bite a bunch of *****s letters and style but i cant bring myself to i make my own, i understand that my letters dont fit your fixed style and i do have nothing but the upmost love and respect for all graff artists and artists, i create all my letters out of my imagination i live out in the styx and miss being absorbed in the sick graff scene of jersey where i used to stay at, however im good on adapting a style or mold you subscribe to, i see my letters and every piece i do i absolutely hate lol but i get better each one witout biting anyones steez or style, i got a fafi tatt on my arm as an homage to female graff writers and she does characters with a paint brush not your lessons of bars in letters (im good), so no sir good god i never seen so many haters in my life oh my lord! I cant help but even glace in awe at other pieces and hope that i will able to create something as dope but on my own creativity and ideas lol aint gonna go be another repeat im good i can see my letters, i would love some tips or pointers on coloring, shading, straight lines and curves, 3d, that would dig that very much thank ya (watch me rise up) :)
     
  16. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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    What the fuck did I just read?
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  17. SneeZ

    SneeZ Senior Member

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    trife , 9 years.

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  18. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    what does it take to get crits around here
     
  19. DontEvenCareAnymore

    DontEvenCareAnymore Senior Member

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    I knew I did not do the T/E right, but I didn't even notice the line being too long, but I had no idea how to pull off an R in the purple one. Thanks for the crits though. ~ Hater666
     
  20. SneeZ

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    @Tasty i cant even see k, n is a bit wierd but ok. the e - just no. u can be easily msitaken for v. Even as a whole composition it looks poor. if you wouldnt say uknoe, i couldnt read a single letter out of it, you got carried away with this one too much. You can do better. Nice job with them 3d bars and all-seeing eye tho.
     
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