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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. primitiveplus

    primitiveplus Senior Member

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    i dig the fuck out of that phat, cool structure

    fp2w7l.jpg
    sloppy as all hell but not bad for a 20 min sketch
     
  2. Cider

    Cider Senior Member

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    I can see where your coming from as far as personal preference. Idk tags just seem like the most logical starting point they're the root of pieces and help you understand symmetry and flares and they're the most frequently written type of graff. I guess I just assumed everyone started with bombing tags then moved on up to throwup's and shit as they got faster and better, idk atleast thats what I did. But ya different things work for different people, so whatever floats your boat. I just figured I'd throw in my 2cents.
     
  3. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    Flares on flares on flares kn chairs on bears on stairs on pairs of hairs on fairs on flares
     
  4. cooldawg

    cooldawg Senior Member

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    Actually, I'll go ahead and give some constructive criticism, the R, it's overlap by the L is the only thing that doesn't smugly fit into the overall shape of the piece, so yeah figure that out, but as you can see by how i responded it's not something that sticks out and i only noticed when examining it a second time
     
  5. SilentVandal

    SilentVandal Senior Member

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  6. DontEvenCareAnymore

    DontEvenCareAnymore Senior Member

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    Mark, the K on your throw still looks like an H. Erase the top line and it should look like a K.
     
  7. cooldawg

    cooldawg Senior Member

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    Your throwies look like them purple bumpy fellas on adventure time, anyway heading in the right direction, i rekn try lines for the holes in the a and r as they're abit easier to figure out size and placement for, and yeah your k's haytchey, and too many bumps i think
     
  8. cred1384

    cred1384 Senior Member

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    Pretty similar as the last two. Wrote SYR this time.
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  9. cooldawg

    cooldawg Senior Member

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    Haha is that just the slr one with an extra bar, anyway i dig, few very minor things i find off like the bottom leg of the y but it's fine


    'freeystyle' for a battle wit someone before they went awol, 'REMEDY'
    Ps i note the 'freeystyle' because unlike most of my other shit I'm actually quite impressed i did this one with a pen
    Pps i think the term freeystyle for an unplanned sketch is silly
     
  10. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    cred i agree with cooldawg about the bottom bar of the Y, other then that nice. keep fucking around with it

    cooldawg that looks cool dawg, sick euro style
     
  11. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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  12. Evoke-HMW-SGC-

    Evoke-HMW-SGC- Member

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  13. DontEvenCareAnymore

    DontEvenCareAnymore Senior Member

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    Don't like the extension from the O to the K, and then the Ks other leg isnt long enough.
     
  14. Jokz

    Jokz Senior Member

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  15. Semper

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    quick shit for the battle.

    hater yours is still sitting on my desk waiting to be coloured, ill get onto it as soon as i have some spare time

    vital battle.jpg
     
  16. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    getting it in


    where is sneeze? ya lil pussy
     
  17. sycophant

    sycophant Senior Member

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    Photo on 2-1-13 at 11.00 PM.jpg

    need to get some feed back i am new obviously so dont go easy how can i make this flow better
     
  18. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    you can make it better by dropping all extensions until you're overall letter structure is better. don't focus on the complicated until you can do the basics, chief.

    overall, definitely not the worst first post i've ever seen
     
  19. sycophant

    sycophant Senior Member

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    the new post needs to be critiqued this toy needs some guidance , One mans garbage usually is garbage so throw it away....
     
  20. toop

    toop Senior Member

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