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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
Need some crits, i wanna improve badly.
learn bars fool
Serious sendone go back to keyboard basics and learn bars
Aight thanks guys I'll take that into consideration.
I know the E is messed up but help me out yo.. really wanna improve.
if you're tired of being a toy, take our advice and go simple. you'll progress way faster that way
Alright thanks. But how do you know when you're ready to move onto more complex styles?
simples become too easy. your style will develop in doing the simps, its just a matter of adjusting when you see fit, and in moderation.
Whets that's supposed to say...?
bump for crits
any suggestions on what I did wrong critique please
Bottom one looks dope.
Esper the real question is what did u do right. Try them keyboard letters u see down on ur keyboard for a starting point, good luck man
that germs and rade stood out for me on the last page.
Not been very productive, been ill. Only one piece with experimental fill, so i guess i'll post more old ones.
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Heres another, I made it simpler than my other terrible sketches, crits please?
^^^you just loose all the arrows and funny stuff and go really basic
asides from having the coffee shakes
can i gets crits
^^I don't like doing simple, I'm actually not bad at it I just wanna get better with more complicated stuff. but thanks for the crits
Send, still got all those extensions your not ready for yet
^^Okay, I'll go work on just a simple straight letter and I'll post it later
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