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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. pace1

    pace1 Senior Member

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    hes at my level and i never had a battle so i wanna try remember where i said no "disrespect" i just need a lil sumtin to do. anyway i bet he has the same chance of winning as i do.
     
  2. -task-

    -task- Senior Member

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    Umm well if your talkin bout TRANE from Getting Up, then its pure coincidence seeing as im not too fond of video games and have never even played it. As for the battle, ive only been writing for a month now so who knows i might get my ass handed to me but w.e. im up for it i guess, just make sure its cool with the mods then name your rules. Peace
     
  3. Fosale!

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  4. Slushi

    Slushi Banned

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    You guys are forgetting that trane sucks.
     
  5. aces

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  6. aces

    aces Elite Member

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    how's this^^ sorry about the double post
     
  7. aces

    aces Elite Member

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    how's this^^ sorry about the double post
     
  8. Slushi

    Slushi Banned

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    1. You can edit posts.
    2. Nice 3d, good use of vanishing point.
     
  9. -task-

    -task- Senior Member

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    Aces, i think overall its good just 2 things i see that i would change. 1) is that under the I there are 2 random red bits that kinda make it hard to decifer what letter it is and 2) the I should be brought more forward and not so hidden behind the A and the L. Other than that im feelin the style and structure. Good luck on the battle BTW. Peace
     
  10. littlerocky

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  11. beone

    beone Elite Member

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    good start build it up make the right side of the u thicker in some spots

    g doesnt go with it change it make it thickers

    bottoms of m are to long
     
  12. aces

    aces Elite Member

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    Aces, i think overall its good just 2 things i see that i would change. 1) is that under the I there are 2 random red bits that kinda make it hard to decifer what letter it is and 2) the I should be brought more forward and not so hidden behind the A and the L. Other than that im feelin the style and structure. Good luck on the battle BTW. Peace [/b][/quote]
    On the I it is supposed to be like this _|_ kinda thing and when I had the I in pencil it looked fine but then when I dit it in pen it kinda looked bad but w/e thanks for the crits
     
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  16. jerm_mtl

    jerm_mtl Senior Member

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    yo imma post a skectch soon my cam is ded :blink:
     
  17. Stewe

    Stewe Senior Member

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    this reminds me of a canvas avos did
    but not bad
     
  18. BoRe-719-

    BoRe-719- Elite Member

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    ai45.photobucket.com_albums_f52_Simpuhl_sdasf.jpg

    something me and infekted were working on, there was some random kid hangin out in the art room and we had this huge whit space in the bottom right corner, so i was like, "draw sumthing".....
     
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  20. writer45

    writer45 Senior Member

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    thats some hot stuff bore