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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Dreams_31:6

    Dreams_31:6 Senior Member

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    Quick piece during my lunch break:
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  2. _flocka_

    _flocka_ Senior Member

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    @Vapik looks and sounds good to me, but IMO I think you should curve the v to the right, cuz the other letters are going that way
     
  3. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    Eh, I tried, but it doesn't really look right. I'll post a pic of it later, and I'll give it a few more tries at least.
     
  4. biblebeltbangerz

    biblebeltbangerz Elite Member

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  5. Dazzy

    Dazzy Member

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    Am I getting there yet? Lol
     
  6. EWL24

    EWL24 Senior Member

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    Dazzy - Get rid of those dumb notches at the top and bottom of the D and make all the bars the same width. Just keep doing simps and also make your tag super simple as well
     
  7. Last_Rival

    Last_Rival New Member

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    ok so im kinda new at this and my bro is a tattoo artist and does graffiti like a pro. Plz tell me what ya think of my first piece
     
  8. Sanguine

    Sanguine Senior Member

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    I think you need to learn basic letter structure before you even think about thinking about doing another piece like that.
     
  9. SyneOne

    SyneOne Senior Member

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    Shit this kids from where im from too lol.

    Kid, no more arrows. thats a new rule for you till we say so.

    Keyboard letters till your fingers hurt.

    And stop wasting your money ordering molotow and grog shit unless you have something worth using it on.
     
  10. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    The girl looks decent though.
    But I don't like Sleeping with Sirens, eh.
     
  11. biblebeltbangerz

    biblebeltbangerz Elite Member

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    bitch look like shes geeked up off that meth ball
     
  12. Last_Rival

    Last_Rival New Member

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    i didn't buy all the molotow and grog stuff, it was my brothers before he left so he just gave me a blackbook and all the markers but thanks for the tips
     
  13. Panic519

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    This sketch is a couple months old but all i got for sketch pics
     
  14. NEwker

    NEwker Senior Member

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    @fake, that's clean as fuck mang!

    crits?
     
  15. Ralpmet

    Ralpmet Senior Member

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    Exchange with spoe185 (Rabse), crits are welcome

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  16. Panic519

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    rev personally im not feeling the swirl on the first R. The whole R itself is kinda small. Also dont like the M overtop of the O, it makes the M seem to big. I do like that E, and the V altough its fairly basic. As for the second piece i am Not feeling that V, and the O is looking awfully small in there. Work on cleaning it up a bit, this was all done in paint markers??

    thats first Rabes is tight. Not feeling the second one as much, mainly the lower case R.


    Here is an outline I am working on. Still going to do a lot of work before i put ink on the page
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  17. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    FAKE - shit looks pretty clean man, get some fat 3D on that bottom piece too.
    RABSE - first piece is decent, just practice a bit more to even out the proportions a little.
    REVOM - The M looks cool, maybe try to make your letters bigger? Seems like the RE is cramped
     
  18. Dazzy

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  19. Ralpmet

    Ralpmet Senior Member

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    Thnx for the crits panic and fury
     
  20. Dreams_31:6

    Dreams_31:6 Senior Member

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