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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    really not much change, I just cleaned it up a bit and liked the way it looked so I figured I might as well post it. any more crits would be cool.
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  2. biblebeltbangerz

    biblebeltbangerz Elite Member

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    u shud do just fat letters instead of the skinny/fat thing until you get better at letters. that's aight but its not there by any means tbh.
     
  3. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    Aight, thanks dog. It just seems like I run out of space in places, I'll work on it though.
    And do you mean for me to keep my bar widths all the same or just change the really skinny parts?
     
  4. biblebeltbangerz

    biblebeltbangerz Elite Member

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    id keep em all the same width ya know what I mean? just bars of whatever size. the really skinny shit is more advanced for when yure ready bro.
     
  5. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    Aight, I'll keep sketching and post up tomorrow if I make any significant progress. Thanks nig
     
  6. biblebeltbangerz

    biblebeltbangerz Elite Member

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  7. Junglizt

    Junglizt Senior Member

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  8. Panic519

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    Canvas thread is dead so posting this here
     
  9. mefisto

    mefisto Senior Member

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    Junglitz:
    I think the DANK is rly good, but maybe the proportion is not right on the K but maybe im wrong.
    Faker: Nice name LOL. I like it
     
  10. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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  11. InnerCityRebel

    InnerCityRebel Senior Member

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    @Vapik that's some good shit there imo

    Shitty piece on shitty paper.
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  12. Junglizt

    Junglizt Senior Member

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    thanks i can see what you mean

    panic - i love that background mate, nice, not sure about the cross bar on the a being bent but apart from that looking good
    Vapik - definitely improving but i think the K needs work
    ICR - looks ok i think a couple of the letters need a little work tho
     
  13. Dreams_31:6

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  14. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    Diggin it Evas, the space seems to be off on the le though.
     
  15. _flocka_

    _flocka_ Senior Member

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    I kinda like this one. Idk crit
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  16. Dreams_31:6

    Dreams_31:6 Senior Member

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    Thanx Vapik. Yeah, I see what you mean, too much open space compared to the rest of the letters
     
  17. Semper

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    Dreams, I'm liking the concept but that r just isn't doing it for me.

    Haven't got much done lately, exchanges coming up after I finish this.
    Crits before I outline?
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  18. Dreams_31:6

    Dreams_31:6 Senior Member

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    Thanx Semper, and yeah, I struggled with that r quite a bit....
    Yours is looking DOPE! Diggin the letter flow and extensions
     
  19. InnerCityRebel

    InnerCityRebel Senior Member

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    @Devek that's sick mane, just fix the K a little and it'll look great
     
  20. _flocka_

    _flocka_ Senior Member

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    Did this earlier in my homeboys book
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