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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. CallMeFred

    CallMeFred Senior Member

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    Adobe flash pro CS6

    Also, is my lettering still off much? Here I was thinking I was making progress, when all of a sudden this 'mefiso' guy tells me I'm lacking.
     
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  2. mefisto

    mefisto Senior Member

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    Fred this aint the street, it doesnt matter how well known u are on the internet, I was just sayin they could be better, no offense, but if you were if you were making progress then I didnt mean it.
     
  3. Semper

    Semper Moderator

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    Fred, it's a nice simple, you have bars pretty much down. Now is time to gradually add some funk, not through extensions at first but through bends and slight leans to letter, maybe a few little details just to ease into a style. You've progressed a lot but there's still a long way to go. I understand what mefisto was saying because it is after still a simple.
     
  4. SeizeTheMoment

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  5. ven0m

    ven0m or Phat2

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    Roid and Blu can! hehe
     
  6. biblebeltbangerz

    biblebeltbangerz Elite Member

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    the letters are aight but I can understand you were a little more attentive to the character, right? anyways, the char animated looks kinda superb imho./
     
  7. Messer

    Messer Senior Member

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    bump for crits

    bible belt- i mad dig your throws, teach me?
    vapik- mess around with your letters, don't just do the same thing everytime with different colours.
     
  8. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    quick bus sketch, any crits?
    IMG_0790[1].jpg
     
  9. Z3BRA

    Z3BRA Elite Member

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    x
     
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  10. Ralpmet

    Ralpmet Senior Member

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    Exchange for Zossqo (Zoss), had a lot of trouble with his name.
    Crits are welcome

    DSC01041_2.jpg
     
  11. Z3BRA

    Z3BRA Elite Member

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    x
     
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  12. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    finished the outline of it, sorry about the shitty pic
    IMG_0792[1].jpg
     
  13. SyneOne

    SyneOne Senior Member

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    ^ looks good just dont like the k
     
  14. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    Thanks dog. And I know, Im pretty bad at k's. I think I might
    Take the k off, I prefer four letter names anyway.
     
  15. _flocka_

    _flocka_ Senior Member

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    Try VAPE? Not sure if any writer writes that already
     
  16. mefisto

    mefisto Senior Member

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    Or go back to your Vapid
     
  17. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    Haha I didn't like the D either really. And it sounds like someone already writes vape, idk that just sounds taken. I'll check it out though.
     
  18. GREK

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    Love your style vapid666 (Y)
     
  19. SyneOne

    SyneOne Senior Member

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    vapik, take the part of the k that goes horizontal and then the leg and push it more upwards, i think itll look better.
     
  20. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    Haha that confused me slightly but I think I know what you mean