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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. biblebeltbangerz

    biblebeltbangerz Elite Member

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    sure bro
     
  2. EDGEx585

    EDGEx585 Senior Member

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    View attachment 643085

    quick one from work the other day, kinda basic but i mostly wanted it clean and solid. not really happy with the cracks, and the picture doesnt really shiw how solid and dark the purple outline is but whatever. maybe ill go back and do more on it later, let me know what you think for now
     
  3. InnerCityRebel

    InnerCityRebel Senior Member

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  4. sycophant

    sycophant Senior Member

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    where's the beef???

    ^ nos. ..the n is kinda jacked up…nice S the top piece of the Kcould be thickened

    ^^nice letters on the edge peace2
     
  5. Moler_Lmk

    Moler_Lmk Senior Member

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  6. Moler_Lmk

    Moler_Lmk Senior Member

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    Holyyyyyy fuuuclkkk every thing I post is fucking twisted some kind of way!!!?
     
  7. Moler_Lmk

    Moler_Lmk Senior Member

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    Fuck all you conforming faggots post your shit sideways or you love cock!!!!
     
  8. Ralpmet

    Ralpmet Senior Member

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    Bump from bottom last page

     
  9. gemer

    gemer Senior Member

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    @ daze love the colors and cleanliness good stuff man
     
  10. Moler_Lmk

    Moler_Lmk Senior Member

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    Yoooo daze write my name sideways!!!? Lmfaoo
     
  11. CallMeFred

    CallMeFred Senior Member

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    @Moler flip your pic 90 degrees clockwise
     
  12. Junglizt

    Junglizt Senior Member

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    edge - looks really clean good job, solid letters and nice fill
    Inner - I'd lose the bubbles protruding from the letters to be honest, keep at it tho

    Picture 4.jpg
    low quality webcam pic as per usual
     
  13. Zossqo

    Zossqo Senior Member

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    piece I just finished for a battle
    Crits ?
    Untitled-1.jpg

    Ps. Mind the fail drop shadow -.-
     
  14. mefisto

    mefisto Senior Member

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    Dude it would be an amazing piece but 2 thing I dont like
    1. The bold black outline. It might look good but they way you made it: it looks like it is not a consistent line, you pulled a line stopped, pulled again, or you might pulled the line slowly.
    But I know how badly you can mess up your piece by messing up the outline with the marker.
    2.r could be taller
     
  15. BaYeNoRe1

    BaYeNoRe1 Banned

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    smoke that s is getting there with the thickness in a the middle just a lil more work and youll have it down
     
  16. Zossqo

    Zossqo Senior Member

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    The messed up outlines are the failed drop shadows :/
    Trust me I know they're bad

    Also thanks for the tip about the R I notice it does look shorter
     
  17. Junglizt

    Junglizt Senior Member

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    cheers for the crit
    i know what you mean about the middle bar of the S but that's always how i've done them, personally i like having a thin middle
    next post i'll do it thicker anyway haha
     
  18. EDGEx585

    EDGEx585 Senior Member

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    word gemer and junglitz thanks

    and jung that black and grey is fucking nasty... nice letter style and the portrait is fucking prime
    you should try to put some little smokey wisps or something to tie em together a little
     
  19. SyneOne

    SyneOne Senior Member

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    thats one of the best simples of seen in this thread. good shit. colours are on point
     
  20. serk92

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    @daze; love the work clean lines and awesome fill
    @innercity: try drawing in the middle of the book and not on the seam, id loose the bubble blowout at the bottom and work on those first 2 letters.
    @smoke; the portrait is dope though id added in some heavy lines at certain spots like by the respirator and some parts of the hat. it might look more together and less like 2 pieces if you placed smoke just barely over the portrait and like someone said above adding in sme smoke wisps will help bring the two together nicely.
    @hero; the H is great the e leaves alot to be desired though id reshape the bottom and loose the flare. also maybe instead of having the e cut into the R why not have the bottom of the e swing behind the r to help give a little depth. id reshape the r a bit and change the angle, at its current angle you could extend the leg all you wnat but its only going into a point, itll seem longer when drawing but teh perspective make sit look tweaked to the far back leaving you in the same spot as now, with a R that lacks a leg. the O is nice, im a fan of making the inner circle of the O alot smaller then it would be normally.

    now time to get soem of my work up here, i need the criticism :)