There's good potential for nice styles here. Just gotta make them more legible. What do they say?

 

I know that's bad,but hey at least im trying ^^

 

Try using bars and start going simple with keyboard letters, cause that looks wonky as shit, if there's one thing I learned in my short time on here it's that simple is better than attempting at style homie

 

thanks,will upload later..

 

Thats the main think, as Ace said. Use bars. Simple letters. Work from there

 

random shit

 

I like that top right handstyle, Moler.

 

Flick dump
Some exchanges and a super quick rase joint. Busting out loads of black and white outlines is how you get good letters

 

^^^That fucking red B!

tbh I think the best way to maximize letter progression is to put all outlining aside, grab a stack of papers, and do pencil sketches until carpal tunnel sets in.
Go back an ink the best ones if you want.

 

Quick first sketch, crits please

 

Mole, killing it, Semper, that Cubic is tight!
Ace, try copying the letters off your keyboard, get all the bars the same width etc, then start mixing it up and trying to distort them.

Latest outline

 

killin it semp.
Joke work on making your bars all even widths before you start trying to add extensions or flavor or whatever/

 

broken down that looks fresh af

 

anyone exhange? i write smoke.. i think

 

Top one is 'Askid'

Bottom one is just a drawing. No lettering in there. Been thinking of adding new elements into it and incorporating 'askid' in there somehow.

 

If you can make the bottom one into letters that'd be Sick.

 

Asis - that bottom one looks pretty nice, reminds me of something i saw in the inspiration thread a while ago
ToyBurky - Less wobbly acid trip more keyboard bro haha
Moler - cool skull lookin thingy
Semper - steez as always
ace - not looking too bad but i'd say simplify it even more to keyboard letters, try and make it look good without any extensions or doo-dads
notbrokendown - not looking too bad but i would say take it down just a notch, let the letters come through a bit more


exchange for fabel

 

Cheers.

Junglist, i'd lose the arrows on the F and the L. they're not really coming from anything and don't add to the piece. also, i think the L as a whole is too skinny and the vertical bar of the F is off.. . look as the width of the back of the B and replicate that in the other letters. . it's a good solid letter in the middle of the piece so in a sense it can hold the weight of bigger letters out towards the ends. Lastly, i would make the crossbar in the A a little thicker. Overall it's a good simple piece, nice fill, 3D seems to be just about there, few tweaks here and there and it'd be banging!!

JOKE battle entry.

 

I'm down. I write loon