Deus, Second pic at top and bottom are good. axil, That a is nice. Kenny maetre, Bring the letters closer, dont be afraid to overlap pencil marks. nice work.
deus - those simples are looking really good, keep em coming dude axil - got a cool style going on there man, can't see anything wrong with it kenny - lose the sariffs and experiment with different bar endings 'Make,' before i ruined it with colour
Really liking that junglitz^ Not a fan of the extension on the top right of the e, but overall thats dope
cheers lich, i see what you mean about the 'e' I only put that extension in there really to give the piece some symmetry loon - looks nice and simple, keep experimenting tho, you could make those letters look sick with that double o i reckon
@junglitz I agree about the e, and it might just be the angle, but it looks like it gets smaller towards the end.
Yeah definitely a few things that need fixing. Gets smaller as in the whole piece? Yeah that's the angle I think its pretty even in person Queez - keep hammering those simples man, your stuff looks pretty good except for a few little things. Eg the right leg of your r I would keep the same width for now
@Deus Very dope simples homie, no real crits. @Junglizt I feel like the extension going to the right isn't that bad tbh. I think the one off the spine of the E looks more out of place, good work anyways dude @Queez That Bore exchange is dope dude, the overall style is fresh. Not bad on the other simples. Not a huge fan of the swirls at the top of the letters though. Besides that and what junglizt said, looks straight.
Yeah I see what you mean. I just need to get my pieces flowing a bit, I dunno but the letters don't seem to work with each other.. Who knows