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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
What's up b.s. Cist here. Long time lurker, first time poster. Here's my most recent throw. C&C are always welcome.
Oh, and another for good measure.
@Semp Dope dude, vertical pieces are always a breath of fresh air.
@Taro Idk why dude but I'm really not feeling that piece. I don't honestly see an O at the end. Keep working however
@Trife No need to post multiple times, you can attach all of the photos to one post. As far as your work, drop the colors, drop the extensions, work on keyboard letters. You don't really seem to have any knowledge of letter structure, and that's one of the biggest factors to dropping dope pieces.
@Cist kinda got some old school funk going which is tight, just need to make sure you execute it well. The T on the bottom piece needs work to match the style. Continue to bust out black and white pieces bro.
how the fuck does someone get shit deleted from the toy thread?? well I guess I'll scratch that off the list... fucking faggots
i was never good at piece's.... EVER lol
Those extensions are terrible, never do those again.
yeah like i said i aint good at piecing
Also the bar widths need to be consistant, but just keep practicing mate
Doing sketch a day may. Here's the one for day 3 BOOST. I'll be pretty inactive for a month or so, I'll still be sketching everyday for sketch a day but I won't be able to get on here very much. I'll still be posting on Instagram if you really wanna see my shit.
Fill Game: Retarded. As always, crits are welcome
"Sketch A Day May '14"
Great challenge, let me know what y'all think
@Dreams Fresh work dude, keep at it!
dream the only crit is the R in cartel is a lillte hard to tell the rest of those are fya
grabs i like the red on the best…if there was one thing to work on it would be bar consistency, the bottom of the O is a little lopsided and the bars on the E are off as well….over all not bad just little tings
@dreams: nice clean work, really liking it
@grabs: think it would look better with a more contrasting outer color instead of the pink
dreams - all of those are looking good man, especially like the snake piece. that s is pretty sick
grabs - agree with sycophant, overall pretty good just a few little things. getting there though keep practicing dawwwwg
kem battle piece
Quick sketch, crits please. Lookin dope dreams and junglizt. Grabs the red on is looking pretty nice
@grabs @jung @ralp @syco: Thanks for the feedback! This competition is pretty hectic, a word a day for the whole month of May...
@syco: yeah, I need to re-look my R's. Not the first time thats been brought up.
Stoned and wanted to draw lol. Ovar
@ grabs diggin the green in the upper post but I think it got a little sloppy on the last post.. bar consistency would help a lot and you could do without the arrows.. i see you progressing tho keep at it.. know you can do better!
@ dreams dope man you getting tight at those dua coloured outlines!
@junglizt that's crazy! maybe its just me but it has a nice blur like effect.. great pencil work
@aids1 good bar size but maybe strip the letter structures down to bare essential (keyboard letters) and work up from there
some quick sketches here, trying to do one everytime i got five minutes spare.. crits and pointers appreciated
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