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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Yea semper and jung are the OGs here always coming with that fire lol.

    Here's a sketch I been working on tonight pretty happy with it. Crits would be appreciated. Probably gonna ink and color soon

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  2. Semper

    Semper Moderator

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    Less is more when you're starting out, get your bends and shit down before you bury your letters with extensions

    Speaking of extensions
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  3. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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  4. sycophant

    sycophant Senior Member

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    <<>>vapid...nice clean letters… the e seems a bit smaller, and the k seems a bit rushed
     
  5. Junglizt

    Junglizt Senior Member

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    vapid - definite improvement there mate, best i've seen from you keep it up. the only thing i'd say is the bottom leg of the K could be tweaked, or teaked haha
    loon - some of the extensions look a bit forced but keep practicing
    semper - shits getting wild man!

    my brain cant handle extensions tonight so i did a quick simple instead
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  6. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    That cake is nice and clean bro like the simple style. And Ye I gotta keep at the extensions pretty satisfied with my straights and shit. Here's the sketch colored. The N is the letter I think needs most work but stil like it

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  7. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    Thanks for the crits everyone, Ill keep working.
    @Loon extensions aren't everything. try adding more style without extensions to develope your letters, then later on when you try them again you'll understand them, and pull em off better.
     
  8. Grabs

    Grabs Senior Member

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    Good work to Semp, Junglizt and Teak.
    @Loon continue to work dude. its nice to see that you're putting in work, just make sure its in the right areas.

    @Miunz Your work with colors is always nice dude. Just make sure all of your letters are legible, you sometimes have an issue with that.

    Random simples
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  9. Semper

    Semper Moderator

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    looking good, keep practicing and don't forget to put some effort into a piece every now and again. I still want to see you do a nice clean one with good lines

    been a while since the colours came out. rase23.jpg
     
  10. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Like the browns semp. U ever paint anything? Would like to see

    Here's a lune

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  11. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    whoa, semper is a mod?
    bro. can i mod.
     
  12. Dreams_31:6

    Dreams_31:6 Senior Member

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    First A4 piece in a while...crits welcome
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  13. Junglizt

    Junglizt Senior Member

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    dank be beefin hahaa
     
  14. Kudos_Q2

    Kudos_Q2 Member

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    I really like that last loon
     
  15. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    looking back theres alot I could have done better...crits?
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  16. topi

    topi New Member

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    sketch.jpg What do you say? ? :)
     
  17. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Some more sketchin crits plz

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  18. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Topi, how old are you?
     
  19. hitamjahat

    hitamjahat Member

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    2013-09-23 12.53.35.jpg 1208380_535886053162981_1809358023_n.jpg
    please comment or critique
     
  20. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    @Hitamjahat learn to use bars and do keyboard letters for a while.
    @Loon what's the point of asking for crits if you're not going listen? Lol