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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. baabo123

    baabo123 Member

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    I dont know ;D how could i make them flow? Should i change my name cause the u is hard to make it flow? And what do you think about my throw up?
     
  2. osber

    osber Senior Member

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    Naw just cut them all somewhere n itll flow better. Also its topheavy on the left because the b and r have the same top and after that its flat. And the arrow on the e, kill that. Maybe try a similar form to the pinched off ends you have going on the tops of the b and r
     
  3. EWL24

    EWL24 Senior Member

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    All of you guys need to start resizing your images before posting them, no one wants to see your crap at 1800 pixels

    Zenith & Baabo - Just practice making all your letters the same height and width, don't add any special style to your words yet. Just basic straight KEYBOARD letters.
    once you perfect that then you can start adding extensions and bends
     
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  4. Grabs

    Grabs Senior Member

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  5. retro-one

    retro-one Member

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    Practice sketch for upcoming stoke battle
    image.jpg

    Grabs, nice sketches, like the third one on the first page, first on on the second, and the last one on the third page. Uppercase A looks better than lowercase ones
     
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  6. Zossqo

    Zossqo Senior Member

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    Oh shit your back would be nice to see some of your stuff again :D
     
  7. baabo123

    baabo123 Member

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    It is so boring to practise with keyboardletters but sometimes man gotta do what his gotta do;D right after this;D rps20141107_100739.jpg
    Edit: rps20141107_104455.jpg
     
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  8. zoup

    zoup Elite Member

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    @Baabo looks a lot cleaner i like it, just work on the width and you got it.

    @Retro, i like the question mark on the K lol, i couldn't figure out how to connect or attach mine either hahaha, here's my practice sketch.

    ai60.tinypic.com_jb6781.jpg

     
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  9. osber

    osber Senior Member

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    IMG_0524.jpg
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    Looks a lot cleaner with that symmetry bruce.

    Some warmup y'all
     
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  10. retro-one

    retro-one Member

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    Osber, you talking about my piece?

    Zoup, your 3D is off on the K
     
  11. zoup

    zoup Elite Member

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    Lmao i just noticed that, i was a lil stoned..
     
  12. ZenithONE

    ZenithONE Senior Member

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    Here's my entry for the stoke battle
    IMG_0502[1].jpg

    the 3d isn't great, i realize its off a little especailly around the e. I tried to make it kinda come to a point if that makes sense, but eh, whatever.
    I had fun with it
     
  13. baabo123

    baabo123 Member

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    Imo that 3d is too long and if it is going to point it would be very far away so it doesnt give that effect. I like those red details but if those blue squares try to be highlights they should be on the same direction on every letter so its kinda fucked up IF it tries to be highlights.
     
  14. ZenithONE

    ZenithONE Senior Member

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    thanks for comments
    the blue squares weren't meant to be highlights but now i look at it and they really do look like highlights lol so the one on the s looks out of place
     
  15. Zossqo

    Zossqo Senior Member

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    Have been practicing 3d a bit lately, so Id love some feedback on this piece please

    Says Poland
    And thats the letter G underneath it
    ai1349.photobucket.com_albums_p753_zossqo_Mobile_20Uploads_20141111_014548_zpsb25xx3qs.jpg
     
  16. thespine

    thespine Senior Member

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    that looks bomb bro.
    only crit I have is the G looks more like a "C" in my opinion.
    still fire tho.

    pic for talk IMG_9157.jpg
    quicky
     
  17. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    Zossqo that for the fb battle? Dig it man keep at it
     
  18. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    Zenith - go back to the drawing board on that on. Lose the letter breaks, make it a bit more square so it doesn't look like individual throw letters, and space it out.
    Zossqo - dope.
    Metal - tone that down, a lot.
    Daser - you got the right idea. Erase your pencil marks to beautify it. I like what you've got going.
     
  19. Zossqo

    Zossqo Senior Member

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    Sure is
     
  20. ZenithONE

    ZenithONE Senior Member

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    Here's my outline for the Mr. Late battle
    I think this is one of the better pieces I've done (so far!), because it's kinda curvy and stylish but still (in my opinion) pretty simple letters.
    IMG_0509[1].jpg