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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. K_LA_X

    K_LA_X New Member

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  2. Semper

    Semper Moderator

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    suburban most of that is looking good, don't be afraid to vary bar widths to add to the flow. Some of those extensions don't really make much sense like the bars that are just sitting behind the D on that dick, they don't seem to have a reason for being there. extensions fill negative space and add flow but you can't just chuck bars everywhere to achieve this. What you could have done with the space behind the D was extend the bottom around more then have it turn back towards the letter, would have the same effect but would make much more sense.

    Need help with this, initially planned on having black 3d but now looking at the darker grey I'm not thinking that it would be a good idea anymore, any ideas as to what colour I could do it?
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  3. SuburbanTurban

    SuburbanTurban Elite Member

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    yo thanks semper i appreciate the feed back man and i see what your saying with the useless extension use.

    that S looks fucking sexy damn, as for color maybe a sublime green or nice orange or something? oreven a purple maybe
     
  4. Arose.One

    Arose.One Elite Member

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    @semper bright green! I hate throwing black 3d on a piece, negates the time I took to thicken most of the lines
     
  5. actasavage

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    I do this thing where I freestyle lines and letter shapes, and it helps me with consistency and proportion. Here's an example, it's obviously not perfect and There's unnecessary detail that looks wack, but my focus doing this is for style development. Thoughts?
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  6. Grabs

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  7. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Not feeling that red piece bro. The D looks like a O and the E is pretty wonky. Kinda like the R tho

    Here's a quicky from today don't really sketch much lately.

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  8. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Lunch time pen sketches.

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  9. lurkermuch

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    thats looking pretty nice loon
     
  10. Lich

    Lich Senior Member

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    looks nice and clean loon
     
  11. Grabs

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  13. TheMastermind

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    @loon damn that straight letter is clean
    @bays good shit. You should add extensions and vary the widths of your bars.
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  14. Mc Satan

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    some weeks back i revisited an old character and gave her the attention she deserved. still proud of this one
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    before color

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  15. stoke.

    stoke. Senior Member

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    bean says bean??where is mr bean?!
     
  16. Semper

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    WIP, rough as guts, went about the extensions slightly differently but still my style.
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  17. Siro_

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    @rade: That outline looks great
     
  18. ZenithONE

    ZenithONE Senior Member

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    hey guys so ive been writing aser recently
    let me know what you think, they're just outlines. 3XQtpzn.jpg
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  19. Lich

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    thats killer semper. cant wait to see the finished product
     
  20. Lykwid

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    I know its not great, any thoughts? the little green fucker was just random don't judge that hahah.