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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    Couple recent doodles.

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  2. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    @Semper: Good stuff as always.

    @Zenith: Not bad. The hand might look better if you use capital E and switch up the R so it'll fit in better. The throwie is to compressed. Keep at it.

    @Lykwid: Gotta start some where. By the way how young are you?

    @Herbn: The yellow and white are cool. Only thing that messed up the yellow one is the Z, should of left the top as wide as the other letters. Keep at it.
     
  3. lurkermuch

    lurkermuch Member

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    beav i like the first photo you posted the top one looks good

    phase that stuffs looking fresh bro nice work
     
  4. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    Preciate it, never really finished the white one but I dig it, and I agree with ya bugs the Z needs some work
     
  5. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Quick sketch page

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  6. Junglizt

    Junglizt Senior Member

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    good to see everyone still putting in the work! sketched this up today, says 'yes'

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  7. Grabs

    Grabs Senior Member

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    @Herbn Small things here and there at bother me but your style is coming along well

    @Loon Your straight letters are looking clean, try changing up your O's more often. I have trouble styling O's so I see why you'd stray away from doing it but I think it'd be beneficial

    @Junglizt that style is dope. you should post it when its outlined, a little hard to make out the letters

    random doodles
    @Turban I was fucking with your letters just for the hell of it
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  8. SuburbanTurban

    SuburbanTurban Elite Member

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    yoo thats dope grabs, that J and E flow nice!
    il draw an over or ovar for either tonight or tomorrow
     
  9. SuburbanTurban

    SuburbanTurban Elite Member

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    @Grabs. Heres a pen sketch i did, i did a pencil sketch too but i fucked it up with a stupid fill and thr lettets where shit too for the most part.
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    I drew this about 2 weeks ago or so and left it cuz i had no ideas for a fill or background. Added thag purple stuff in the background and some highlights and dono if i should leave it or maybe make the letters black or something
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  10. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    I like the R and E connection on that smore piece.

    Lunch time sketching

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  11. Lich

    Lich Senior Member

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    i dig that middle one loon and ur throw is looking good
     
  12. SuburbanTurban

    SuburbanTurban Elite Member

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    thanks loon
    those look good, i like the first O you did in the top one more then the triangular one but i guess you wana change up O's in your word
     
  13. Grabs

    Grabs Senior Member

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    Good looks turban, that smore is dope

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  14. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Yea I like that O better just wanted to try a different one. Kinda threw off the piece tho but w.e that's the beauty of working with pen I guess
     
  15. Grabs

    Grabs Senior Member

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    Figured I'd fuck around a little with Grabs again, Im gonna start trying to at least post something daily.
    Crits are always welcome IMG_0335.jpg
     
  16. lurkermuch

    lurkermuch Member

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    Grabs I like it looks good comparing to the style your going for there's probably some room for improvement in your letters, but really everything is looking fresh

    In the top one grabs Your G has a real nice curve to it whereas the S the bottom half is pointed and jagged just one thing I noticed you might want to be aware of throughout perhaps if you had more of a pattern with your curves and points it would flow better I dunno something you can consider

    The bottom one is all jagged and you got your letters lined up nicely it seems to flow better

    Careful with your L loon your throw looks tight but the L looks better in these ones ^
     
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  17. SPEK_

    SPEK_ New Member

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    Structure

    I am here looking for crit. I know the name is already taken but I'm just working on my letter structure and 3D.
    Thanks
     

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  18. zoup

    zoup Elite Member

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    Tried makin my middle bar Z thicker, crits appreciated.
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  19. sycophant

    sycophant Senior Member

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    ^^^the arrows look forced and the p needs work on the bottom, the arrows look whack , if i dint no it was a P i wouldn't no
     
  20. Grabs

    Grabs Senior Member

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    @spek work with keyboard letters for a bit, get down basic structure before you add odd crevasses into your letters

    @zoup agree with syco ^^ That P shouldnt have that drastic of a curve on the spine, throws off the whole letter

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