sick abe and stoke zoup the S through M throws it off abit but good experimentation. I don't think your style is there yet but you have your own style so keep drawing dude and it will be looking real nice. keep at it man nice syco keep on doing those and experiment a little but don't get too crazy on it. I really like that G grabs maybe take your time on outlining it or maybe its the felt your using. looking nice though keep it up loon I like the ones you did at work, middle one seems kinda off though I think you have too much going on in it. bottom one is cool though some random pen sketch I did then outline with felt to make it more bold. kinda weird but yeh I donno. suppose to read sorow/sorrow just put one R in it. crits appreciated
@SurburbanTurban Letters themselves look pretty clean and dope, although I don't like the second O as much as the first. The bottom right bar of the W looks wider than the rest, and IMO, the round add-ons under the S and RW look weird. Eh, just playing around with some hookups Crits would be appreciated
@SuburbanTurban No real crits just that the line above the s looks a little off, like it doesn't belong. @loon I would have extended the bottom line of the L. and bent it a bit too. Also the middle line of the N is too skinny...I would have changed the stuff i put in red.
^^grabs..ruin has flow the bars could be more consistent like with the R the down bars is slightly thinner same with the N, the bends work for symmetry on the r an n just really looks light bar width consistency…the over looks like the bell was betting ready to ring and u rushed it >> loon good bar consistency except for the N <<retro i would like to see what a full word in that style looks like one letter is hard to critique the only thing that really stands out is the curve on the inside of the down bar also the part of the foot that has an arrow coming of the curve on the small bar could have went straight down to not look so awkward actually both could be straightened out for a sharper effect...
The R looks like it's getting squished by the A and the D. Like it's pushing against them to save it's life lol. Here's a quick paint marker freestyle
Nice lich keep it up I like that loon, maybe you should of had your second O on abit of a slant to match the other letters