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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Abe13

    Abe13 Senior Member

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    Working on this style
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  2. stoke.

    stoke. Senior Member

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  3. Grabs

    Grabs Senior Member

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    @abe that style is fire dude, you should throw some color on them, a crazy fill would do it justice. dope freights you posted in the other thread as well. I hope I catch one of those cursive ones coming through my town.

    @Stoke damn dude, your shit flows so well. Only thing I'd crit is legibility but then again, that plays into your style. You down for an exchange?
     
  4. zoup

    zoup Elite Member

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    @abe i like that style.

    Smoeth battle sketch.
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  5. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    Abe & Stoke - both dope.

    Jak- feeling that top one, always liked that style
     
  6. sycophant

    sycophant Senior Member

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    ^stoke that shit is fire...
    >abe i like wherre you are going with it
     
  7. Grabs

    Grabs Senior Member

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    The maroon/purple fucked the fill on the bottom one but
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  8. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Randoms from work and a quickie at home


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  9. SuburbanTurban

    SuburbanTurban Elite Member

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    sick abe and stoke

    zoup the S through M throws it off abit but good experimentation. I don't think your style is there yet but you have your own style so keep drawing dude and it will be looking real nice. keep at it man

    nice syco keep on doing those and experiment a little but don't get too crazy on it. I really like that G

    grabs maybe take your time on outlining it or maybe its the felt your using. looking nice though keep it up

    loon I like the ones you did at work, middle one seems kinda off though I think you have too much going on in it. bottom one is cool though

    some random pen sketch I did then outline with felt to make it more bold. kinda weird but yeh I donno. suppose to read sorow/sorrow just put one R in it. crits appreciated
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  10. sycophant

    sycophant Senior Member

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    thnx for the positive feedback..posting new shite soon
     
  11. retro-one

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    @SurburbanTurban
    Letters themselves look pretty clean and dope, although I don't like the second O as much as the first. The bottom right bar of the W looks wider than the rest, and IMO, the round add-ons under the S and RW look weird.

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    Eh, just playing around with some hookups
    Crits would be appreciated
     
  12. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Not really feeling the R itself so the addons seem a bit much but that's just me

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  13. jak24

    jak24 Senior Member

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    @SuburbanTurban No real crits just that the line above the s looks a little off, like it doesn't belong.

    @loon I would have extended the bottom line of the L. and bent it a bit too. Also the middle line of the N is too skinny...I would have changed the stuff i put in red.

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  14. Grabs

    Grabs Senior Member

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    Marker freestyles.. happy 420
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  15. sycophant

    sycophant Senior Member

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    ^^grabs..ruin has flow the bars could be more consistent like with the R the down bars is slightly thinner same with the N, the bends work for symmetry on the r an n just really looks light bar width consistency…the over looks like the bell was betting ready to ring and u rushed it


    >> loon good bar consistency except for the N


    <<retro i would like to see what a full word in that style looks like one letter is hard to critique the only thing that really stands out is the curve on the inside of the down bar also the part of the foot that has an arrow coming of the curve on the small bar could have went straight down to not look so awkward actually both could be straightened out for a sharper effect...
     
  16. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    The R looks like it's getting squished by the A and the D. Like it's pushing against them to save it's life lol.

    Here's a quick paint marker freestyle

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  17. Lich

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  18. QUEEZ

    QUEEZ Senior Member

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    Anyone wanna do an exchange ?
     
  19. SuburbanTurban

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  20. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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